| "Forbidden Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Serenacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Story was one of the bestcrossovers I've ever read.!!! |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, and by the by, please update quicker. |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 20:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great Job!!! Keep going!!! I wanna see how Yami knows Serena, although I have my suspicions.
I don't be to be nasty or anything, but if I may, I have some constructive critism to make.
1. I know Yugi can put up a better fight. Wait a moment, that's Yami I'm think about. I'll take that back.
2. You typed that Yugi's Celtic Guardian was in defense mode, yet he still lost lifepoints when Harpie's Brother attacked.
3. Yugi played TWO monsters on one turn: Summoned Skull and Dark Magician. That's against the rules.
4. Serena used Change of Heart when Yugi attacked. That's a magic card and you can't use it to counter an attack... or can you?
5. I'm not sure, but I don't think you can just voluntarily discard from your hand and draw new cards.
Then again, your the author and this is your story. If you want to change the rules around abit, it's YOUR call. So I wouldn't be surprised OR offended if you told me: **** IT, IT'S MY STORY AND I'LL DO WHATEVER I WANT WITH IT. Once again, no offense if you don't like me critisizing you. I just have a tendency to correct people when I think they're mistaken about something. |
Reviewed By: Saris yui On: July 05, 2003 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I glad you updated your prologue and the story please write more soon want to find out everyone's past and what relationship him and usagi have. see ya
ja'ne |
Reviewed By: duos_bunny On: June 18, 2003 15:49 CDT
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hey!! authoress-sama! hurry up there!!
~bunny~ |
Reviewed By: sugarpony On: May 24, 2003 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't really seen any fic like this before, but I really like it! What can I say? I know what I like, and I like this! |
Reviewed By: t On: May 10, 2003 23:41 CDT
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hhhhhhhhuuuuuurrrrrrrryyyyyyyy |
Reviewed By: Saris yui On: April 17, 2003 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD to see serena snao at some people sometimes and her being with yami yummmy hope you write more soon. |
Reviewed By: adb On: March 31, 2003 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So far it's a story far from the norm. I like it alot, keep going, I want to find out how Seto likes the fact that Serena has a few Blue Eyes. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Cosmos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has some serious potenial. It's orginal, has great grammar, and combines the two unlike animes effectively. Plus the plot is fantastic. As long as you keep up the good work, we should have no problems whatsoever. |
Reviewed By: duos_bunny On: March 20, 2003 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heheheeh!!! this is a good plot write more write more more!!!!!!!!!^________^ *giggles* plz plz!! i like it and i wanna know what her yami looks like! and i bet this is a serena/yugi (yami) fic if it is then COOL!i wanna know more so write!
~bunny~ ^-~ |
Reviewed By: Shadowmoon On: March 18, 2003 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should write more. It's rather interestingly surpising. I nay can wait to read more of it. :) |
Reviewed By: Moonlight's Angel On: March 18, 2003 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this!!I hope she ends up with Joey!! think about. |
Reviewed By: DJ On: March 18, 2003 07:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was all good! I really liked this story here! This one was very cool and original! Serena as Pegasus's daughter?! That was something I didn't expect! I really hope you continue this story! I also hope that Serena meets Yugi and the others soon! It would be cool if Yugi and Serena hooked up! That would be sweet to read! Well, gotta go. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: devilangelvana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you know the rules in Duel Monsters? IF your opponent places a monster in defense mode, and you place a monster in attack mode and have it attack your opponent's monster in defense mode, your oppoent's life points are not effected. I like the story, it's great. I'm working on a story called Pegasus's Niece on ff.net and I am working on chapter 2. I can't wait until you post the next chapter up. |
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