| "Forbidden Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0.0 PLZ leat Seto ask for her help!!!! PLZ! PLZ! let her have left fake sailor item's behind...... and kept her brouch, crystal, ect (just in case sailor moon was desperately needed)................... Let them be the key to Yami's memory's.... and ALL of the millenium item's TRUE power's....... Can Seto OR Yugi PLZ PLZ PLZ be the one from her dream's........ can the one the princess REALLY fell in love with plz be one of them........ and DARIEN be EVIL...... (e-mail me if you run out of idea's for this story..... since I seem to be on a role with idea's)
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Reviewed By: Darkrose 17 On: February 04, 2005 14:00 CST
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I am not a member of mediaminer so feel free to ignore my advice. This is an excellent fanfic and you should update soon. I think Serena/Usagi's ring should be called the Millenium signet. In ancient times a signet ring was used by nobles to place their symbol on a bit of melted wax to seal a letter. That way, the person who recived the letter would know who it was from. I just thought it would be fitting. Update soon!!!:)
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Reviewed By: Darkrose 17 On: February 02, 2005 14:12 CST
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Interesting, this is a good fic. UPDATE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mistress of the Sea On: October 10, 2004 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've created a "GREAT" fanfic; I was hooked onto this fic as soon as I read the first chapter. I also have an idea as to who Zi's reincarnation might be. I mean, you did shorten the list of choices down to a few people that I know Usa can be with. Well hope to see the chapter sometime soon. ^__~
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Reviewed By: SailorNeptune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. The plot is a very good idea. I hope you update soon cause I'm dieing to know what happens
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Reviewed By: dark huntress On: March 19, 2004 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me again. In an earlier review I put up I had two ideas on what serena's ring can be called. PLEASE CHECK MY REVIEW FFROM EARLIER. JANUARY 14, 2004.
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Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: February 29, 2004 06:59 CST
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CHAPTER 4: WHA? how the hell did Mokuba get recaptured? You REALLY shouldn't skip bits of the plot like that...
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Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: February 28, 2004 10:50 CST
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Good stuff, but there are a few major flaws. 1) There was no 'Yami' per se until the battle with Kaiba (when the difference in Yugi/Yami's basic natures tore them apart mentally) and Yami didn't ask Yugi to adress him by that name until after the battle with Pegasus. 2) You seem to have Yugi using cards he simply does not OWN. He has never possessed Battle Ox or Axe of Despair. 3) You only draw one card per turn in duel monsters, certain card effects aside.
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Reviewed By: dark huntress On: January 14, 2004 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great fanfic. I came up with some ideas on what to call serena's millennium ring. You can call it millennium insignia or millennium circlet. Fell free to use them. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: black thorn On: January 04, 2004 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great crossover. I hope you update it soon. The story so far is great. I really want to find out who Serena is going to be with.
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Reviewed By: Nakerti On: November 16, 2003 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. But you're missing Ryou!Are you going to make it that Serena comes in just in time to see "Ryou" ruthlessly rip the sennen eye out, then lick it?I think Neia is pronounced Noa. Is Mariku going to be in this?!!In other words are you going to do a sequel for Battle City?
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Title: Runner-up
Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 23:15 CST
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This is the 2nd best Yu-Gi-Oh Sailor Moon crossover onmm.org. Just in case ya wanna know what I think is number 1 it's The Battle of Hearts by Salior Star Universe. That is how you spell her name I spelled it right just in case.
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Reviewed By: MasterIshtar75 On: October 23, 2003 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, except that the names of the Kaibas are wrong. Gozaburo Kaiba was the name of the adoptive father and Noah Kaiba is the name of his son. Other than that, it was a really good story.
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Reviewed By: YugiohNicole@aol.com On: October 16, 2003 21:16 CDT
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Me like!
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Title: Extremely Annoyed
Reviewed By: Star Girl11 On: October 15, 2003 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD CHAPTER! But why haven't you updated it on fanfiction.net if I hadn't seen it here I might have never known about the update.
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Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is preaty good I like it a lot... I hope you continue this, its so hard to get good fanfiction anymore |
Reviewed By: Hotaru Aino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's safe to say that my jaw hurts from being on the floor so much. I can't wait to read more. Normally I'm not horribly fond of those 'Serena leaves the scouts' fics but this has been a really good read, you made it believable. As for the battle scene it's fantastic *grins* it makes me want to go out and get a deck *lol*
On an unrelated note, I was wondering if maybe you'd like to join me and some other talented writters at the Yugi Festivities? E-mail me for the details ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Serenacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Story was one of the bestcrossovers I've ever read.!!! |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 20:28 CDT
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Oh, and by the by, please update quicker. |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 20:26 CDT
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Great Job!!! Keep going!!! I wanna see how Yami knows Serena, although I have my suspicions.
I don't be to be nasty or anything, but if I may, I have some constructive critism to make.
1. I know Yugi can put up a better fight. Wait a moment, that's Yami I'm think about. I'll take that back.
2. You typed that Yugi's Celtic Guardian was in defense mode, yet he still lost lifepoints when Harpie's Brother attacked.
3. Yugi played TWO monsters on one turn: Summoned Skull and Dark Magician. That's against the rules.
4. Serena used Change of Heart when Yugi attacked. That's a magic card and you can't use it to counter an attack... or can you?
5. I'm not sure, but I don't think you can just voluntarily discard from your hand and draw new cards.
Then again, your the author and this is your story. If you want to change the rules around abit, it's YOUR call. So I wouldn't be surprised OR offended if you told me: **** IT, IT'S MY STORY AND I'LL DO WHATEVER I WANT WITH IT. Once again, no offense if you don't like me critisizing you. I just have a tendency to correct people when I think they're mistaken about something. |
Reviewed By: Saris yui On: July 05, 2003 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I glad you updated your prologue and the story please write more soon want to find out everyone's past and what relationship him and usagi have. see ya
ja'ne |
Reviewed By: duos_bunny On: June 18, 2003 15:49 CDT
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hey!! authoress-sama! hurry up there!!
~bunny~ |
Reviewed By: sugarpony On: May 24, 2003 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't really seen any fic like this before, but I really like it! What can I say? I know what I like, and I like this! |
Reviewed By: t On: May 10, 2003 23:41 CDT
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hhhhhhhhuuuuuurrrrrrrryyyyyyyy |
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