| "Forbidden Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Saris yui On: April 17, 2003 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD to see serena snao at some people sometimes and her being with yami yummmy hope you write more soon. |
Reviewed By: adb On: March 31, 2003 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So far it's a story far from the norm. I like it alot, keep going, I want to find out how Seto likes the fact that Serena has a few Blue Eyes. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Cosmos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has some serious potenial. It's orginal, has great grammar, and combines the two unlike animes effectively. Plus the plot is fantastic. As long as you keep up the good work, we should have no problems whatsoever. |
Reviewed By: duos_bunny On: March 20, 2003 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heheheeh!!! this is a good plot write more write more more!!!!!!!!!^________^ *giggles* plz plz!! i like it and i wanna know what her yami looks like! and i bet this is a serena/yugi (yami) fic if it is then COOL!i wanna know more so write!
~bunny~ ^-~ |
Reviewed By: Shadowmoon On: March 18, 2003 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should write more. It's rather interestingly surpising. I nay can wait to read more of it. :) |
Reviewed By: Moonlight's Angel On: March 18, 2003 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this!!I hope she ends up with Joey!! think about. |
Reviewed By: DJ On: March 18, 2003 07:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was all good! I really liked this story here! This one was very cool and original! Serena as Pegasus's daughter?! That was something I didn't expect! I really hope you continue this story! I also hope that Serena meets Yugi and the others soon! It would be cool if Yugi and Serena hooked up! That would be sweet to read! Well, gotta go. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: devilangelvana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you know the rules in Duel Monsters? IF your opponent places a monster in defense mode, and you place a monster in attack mode and have it attack your opponent's monster in defense mode, your oppoent's life points are not effected. I like the story, it's great. I'm working on a story called Pegasus's Niece on ff.net and I am working on chapter 2. I can't wait until you post the next chapter up. |
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