| "Forbidden Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: DJ On: March 18, 2003 07:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was all good! I really liked this story here! This one was very cool and original! Serena as Pegasus's daughter?! That was something I didn't expect! I really hope you continue this story! I also hope that Serena meets Yugi and the others soon! It would be cool if Yugi and Serena hooked up! That would be sweet to read! Well, gotta go. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: devilangelvana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you know the rules in Duel Monsters? IF your opponent places a monster in defense mode, and you place a monster in attack mode and have it attack your opponent's monster in defense mode, your oppoent's life points are not effected. I like the story, it's great. I'm working on a story called Pegasus's Niece on ff.net and I am working on chapter 2. I can't wait until you post the next chapter up. |
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