| "Just Like Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 12:18 CST
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Very nice story about G/V's first time. The humor with Goten and Trunks added just the right touch to make it seem totally "teenager-y". (Is that a word? ) Anyway, you really captured the innocence I picture these two having.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: March 23, 2003 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful job! I especially like how palyful Videl is and I LOVE Trunks and Goten...they cracked me up! Yummy lemon too!
All around fantastic job! |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way to go!
I just LOVE G/V lemons, they are so sweet and innocent...I must say they are a perfect match. You worte this so well, and I loved the water gun scene! Keep up the super work!!! |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 02:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very sweet, great job! You don't find many Gohan/Videl fics around, thanx for the link ^_^
~EM |
Reviewed By: Demetz On: March 20, 2003 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read a Videl/Gohan lemon that well written in a long time. Thank you for an excellent read and please keep writing, your style is excellent. |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 07:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, Ku, this was absolutely adorable! I loved how you used Trunks and Goten to break the tension a bit. Their comments from their perception at the very end were just too cute!!! Give them a few years and they'll look back at this situation and smack themselves. You put such neat reality checks into the fic as well, from Videl's attempt to break Gohan's seriousness to their concerns about eating on the table. ;-) It boiled down to them being normal, hormonal teenagers, and we all know what they do best!!!
This was a wonderful lemon that I truly enjoyed reading.
Made me wish I were a teenager again.
Well, actually, it made me wish I were a teenager named Videl, daughter of the great Hercule Satan, girlfriend of Son Gohan...
*Sigh* Y'all get the picture. |
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed On: March 19, 2003 01:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, that's the way to study!! Fabulous humor! I love the water pistol hidden in her hand, the geek comment and the last lines. Good Gohan/Videl fics are hard to find. This is definitely one of them. Great Fic!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 22:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved it! Gohan's such a sweetie! Trunks and Goten's comments at the end cracked me up. Great job! |
Reviewed By: Caitlin On: March 18, 2003 17:53 CST
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Almost forgot...read my Gohan/Videl fic. I need more reviews. Thanks |
Reviewed By: Caitlin On: March 18, 2003 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely love the story! The relationship between G/V is so adorable! Keep up the great work! You should really make a sequel. |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 14:10 CST
Comment/Review:
oooooooo.....naughty Gohan and Videl...they're not even wed!!! That was HOT!!! sweet to..... I liked G's concern for V...awww, I liked the humour too... esp the water pistol part!! Good fic!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 13:58 CST
Comment/Review:
yeah that was great i loved it lol even the humor was fantastic |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol
that was really good ^_^ I dont read hetero much anymore (ITS ALL RAVEN'S FAULT!) but this was definatly worth the read!!
keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 09:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Shhhhhhh don't tell anyone but it was all Gohan and Videls fault, after Gohans first date I was hooked on DBZ. I loved your take on their first time. |
Reviewed By: Shelita On: March 18, 2003 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This had to be one of the best Gohan/Videl first time stories I've ever read. It seemed so natural and not forced at all. Plus you had the humorous scenes with Goten & Trunks. Just one question. Where was Chi Chi when all this happened? And it is so nice to read a fic that was well written. Unfortunately sometimes those are few and far between. Keep up the good work. |
