| ""Channel Sixty-Nine"" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: nice fic
Reviewed By: joshua hunter 756764 On: June 16, 2005 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi i read this a million time its still as great as it was please update soon i have been waiting long enough not a week not a month but a year man please up date soon my email is josh20_3@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: JSinuYasha On: December 04, 2004 03:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the idea, i'll look forward to you updating this fic.
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Title: Channel Sixty Nine
Reviewed By: Lady Sessshomaru On: November 27, 2004 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon I'm dying to know what's going to happen P,S this story ROCKS!!!
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Title: uhhh
Reviewed By: Cillaty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man you need to keep on with this story. you got me all hype now!
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Reviewed By: Vera On: March 26, 2003 19:12 CST
Comment/Review:
hmmmmmmm This is good in a twisted way... Update! |
Reviewed By: critter On: March 22, 2003 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW~ This is great! I love the idea! I reeeeaaally want you to continue!! I love your stories! Don't leave me hanging!! What happens next? |
Reviewed By: Emily On: March 22, 2003 12:51 CST
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ewwwww gohan is such a pervert! |
Reviewed By: Candy Cane On: March 21, 2003 00:58 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is cool... I have Tons of questions... How long has Gohan been a pornstar? He must have gotten the money from somewhere for the last 20 years with Videl and his daughter? Has he been a pornstar for 20 years? Does he pose public nude on magazines and books, for example in Playgirl? Does he make money from stripping? Is he a male giggalo, or male escort? Does he work as a model for fashion shows and magazines? Maybe he can do underwear commercials... OH YEAH I CAN PICTURE GOHAN IN HEART, AND TEDDYBEAR UNDERWEARS. I can also picture him doing Bachlorette parties with an underwear with the words 'Play with MEh' across it... Since Bra said he wanted to do this, has he been having casual encounterments with other girls since he was married? I LOVE THIS NAUGHTY GOHAN! I hate the nerd from GT! Videl sucks TOO... Don't make people find out yet! Bra can find out more of Gohan's dirty secrets... Maybe Bra can be one of Gohan's mistress at first then when the Z-gang finds out. Gohan and Videl can get a divorce... Pan and Bra will duke it out... Then Gohan and Bra can get together.. Since Gohan is so dirty they can stay unmarried...
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Jerry Springer: Gohan what else do you do other than being an actor in sex movies?
Gohan: I'm a male gigalo, a male exotic dancer, and a nude model... I'm Playgirl's Man of the year... I am the MAN!
Jerry Springer: Does your wife know about this? Are you being unfaithful?
Gohan: I've also been unfaithful to Videl since the very beginning; the first is with her best friend Erasea when we were younger then the list goes on... I fucked them all good! They come back asking for more... My hobby is to strip in front of ladies in a club and let them slap my arse... It turns me on... I also let them lick my abs, put lotion on me, and suck my on me through my g-string... I sometimes fuck a few...
Jerry Springer: How did you feel when you had to have sex with Bra.
Gohan: Hesitant at first. Then I relised that I should just enjoy fucking a demi saiyan... I can put more force into the thrust without hurting her. It felt goooooooooooooooood....
Jerry Springer: Are you still going to hide this dark secret?
Gohan: Sure why not... They don't need to know...
Jerry Springer: There you have it folks
Lady from the Audience: I wouldn't mind getting a lap dance from you in your G-string...
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Reviewed By: Vince On: March 20, 2003 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
So Gohan and Bra are only temporary porno stars. I thought Gohan did it for a long time already. Don't make people find out! It'll ruin the story. It is to soon for any1 to find out. Does Gohan sleep around? He does seem like the type in your story. He must do something other than being a porn star? Is he a scholar or a professor or both?
Update!!! |
Reviewed By: Fantasia Girl On: March 18, 2003 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
If one of the mask men is Gohan then who's the other? Gohan's old friend Sharpner with short hair? |
Reviewed By: iOda On: March 18, 2003 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is good... I read it on ff.net and I was wondering where this story is on mm.org. I finally found it under DBGT. I was look this up under DBZ. Your story will probably get taken down at ff.net...
Nice story.... How did Gohan become a pornstar???? I hope they don't start a relation... Or else it would be weird... Does Gohan always cover himself with a mask? I wonder if Goten or Trunks watches these channel? |
Reviewed By: Teddy On: March 21, 2003 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm... There's a chapter more here than at ff.net... Is Gohan just saying that as an excuse to be a pornstar to cover up he does it for fun? Or does he really need the money? I'm a bad artist... Maybe Gohan can introduce Bra to some famous female pornstars...
Wonderful Gohan Pornstar Story!
Are you going to make the Pan or anyone find out?
PS: The Sons of Goku might look inncent but are not... |
Reviewed By: HollowGoo On: March 18, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHH!!! GOHAN IS IN PORNO!!! WHAT IS HE GOING TO BE IN NEXT? PLAYGIRL? GOHAN IS SUCH A DIRTY BASTARD!!! DOES HE HANG AROUND WITH YAMPCHA OR SOMETHING... I WONDER WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN THE Z-GANG FINDS OUT, CHI-CHI AND PAN ESPECIALLY!!! IS GOHAN WITH VIDEL? |
