| "Tornado's Falling" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: j On: May 09, 2002 21:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
i don't reveiw until there is at least two chapters. duh its in the name. |
Reviewed By: Vegeta On: April 26, 2002 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, heres the 2nd review i promised!!
um...it was a really good intro, y did the thing blow up thogh?? c... a unknown question, this is y u need to write the next chapeter!!! |
Reviewed By: Vegeta On: April 26, 2002 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it sounds very interisting and i would like it if you would write the next chapter
cuase i'm kinda convused
hey, and if i write 3 reviews will that count?
o well, i will try anywayz |
