"Serendipity" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: angel On: July 16, 2003 20:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Gret story. I like it :) |
Reviewed By: angel On: July 15, 2003 20:00 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Good story.Very sweet. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: March 31, 2003 09:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is so adorable! They make a great little family, except crazy Heero needs to loosen up. Geez! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 09:45 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Smart kid! She's hook them up just yet. Great story, very romantic and sweet. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: March 18, 2003 21:19 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Really good first chapter.It's sweet to see Heero as a daddy...all Lauren needs is a mommy. ^^ |