"Kakkarot" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: lee-lee On: June 03, 2004 23:24 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love it. Please update soon!!!!!!!
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Title: nice-very nice Reviewed By: JeSSy rediculous On: October 17, 2003 22:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: SaDD poor chichi make the next chapter better for her and hehe make gokou not sound so much like a demented follower of vegeta as much as i love vege i cant stand to see gokou decresed into becoming a sap... like all those royal followers come to think of it this was a really good fanfic continue writing it cause i wanna know how the family reacts to all this truth... and since chichi left gokou cause of his goodygoody goodyness that they could be together again but in the old ways VEGE AND BULMA styles yeah oh well please continue and excuse my dislikes cause this fanfic is afterall yours>>>hehe just continue it cause your poor fans are waiting
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Reviewed By: gemini66 On: May 07, 2003 07:53 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this fic is like chocolate once you have a taste you have to have more *grins* update soon please |
Reviewed By: Cindy On: March 30, 2003 13:50 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really love it so far and i'm dieing to read more of it!! update it some time soon Please!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Silver Tiger On: March 24, 2003 21:46 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great story. Never thought that Goku would lie. He just doesn't seem the type. Please, continue with the story. Update soon, please!!!! |
Reviewed By: gemini66 On: March 24, 2003 13:58 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: kakarotto with a big secrect i like it ...but i need more:) hope you update
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Reviewed By: Kinaele [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 05:04 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow! I absolutely love this story. It's very original. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 14:52 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow that was awsome and i love this fic. he finally told the B&*$# off and that was great never liked Chichi that much. Well any way keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 01:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it's a good story and all but where is this story going? is this going to all of it not, give us some hints |
Reviewed By: G-jin On: March 22, 2003 17:34 CST Comment/Review: Hurray!!!!!111 The next chaper! I've been waiting for over 2 years for you to post it! I'm so very happy!
Your story was one of the first DBZ storys I read. I'm so very overjoied! Please continue and post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 10:22 CST Comment/Review: Interesting concept, good story. Please continue to update. |
Reviewed By: Kia On: March 20, 2003 06:38 CST Comment/Review: I like this story... do continue and update soon! |
Reviewed By: G-jin On: March 19, 2003 13:22 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yes! A life sign from you! I love this story! I read it when you first posted it on ffn, and I've been waiting since then for you to post the next chapter and I still am. I once tried to tell you how much I love this story with Icq, but sadly you haven't answered. But that doesn't matter as long as you will continue to write this story!
I'm so very happy to see you posting again! I thought all hope was lost, but I thought wrong and I'm happy about it!
I can not wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 23:48 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow that was great and just really reveiling never knew that goku could a secrect for that long. |