| "Sweet Embrace" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Tracybrat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 09:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too colorful. Hard to read and keep track of the action. I really didn't like it at all. |
Title: i hate you and your stupid fanfic
Reviewed By: fuck you On: April 29, 2005 22:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
id give you a 0 in rating if i could what the fuck is is your problem you bitch there NOT gay and for the sickos who like reading this shit your disgusting there NOT gay there staight goku has a WIFE AND VEGETA IS MADE FOR BULMA A GIRLLLLL.WHEN YOU TALK TO THAT CREATOR OF DRAGONBALL Z HE WILL TELL YOU THERE NOT MEANT TO BE GAY NEVER WAS NEVER WILL SO KEEP ON DREAMING ASS HOLE
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Reviewed By: King Haruka On: May 21, 2004 13:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
*hehehehe* A very interresting paring well done never dreamed seeing those two in that position LOL
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Reviewed By: TreeFrog101 On: April 04, 2004 20:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hot damn! That was a beautiful story... I love that pairing, and almost no one else does for some reason... You are one kick ass writer, very descriptive, and it's always good to have a mystery like that, giving it away at the end. *claps hands* Wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Mr. Vegita and Mr. Nothing On: May 06, 2003 20:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
WLAAHALKHS!!! IT IS ME!!! MR. NOTHING!! ALONG WITH MY COUNTER FRIEND, MR AND MRS VEGITA!! SPELEAHSIA!! WE ARE ON CRACK!!! SPOLOIETER!!! SHMOA!!! WELL, WE READ YOUR STORY, AND OF COURSE AS YOU CAN TELL BY THE RATING WE GAVE IT, WE THINK ITS ATTROCIOUS. GOKU AND VEGITA SHOULD BE HUNG!!! |
Reviewed By: Gemini Maxwell On: July 28, 2002 16:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is really great! I do love your writing, keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 05:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've said it before, and I'll definitely say it again... I don't mind yaoi fics at all. Especially not when they're written well. I must say... this is one of the most well written fics I've read, and that's from any genre. It's definitely the best lemon I've read (although I'm not too keen on the pairing). Congrats on creating such an awesome work of art! I loved it! |
Reviewed By: Mouse On: December 03, 2001 00:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I normally don't do the review thing, but this is one of the rare times I'm making an exception. This is one of THE sweetest, most well written DBZ yaoi fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading. It's just the right length, and is a lemon without being overly detailed in the sensitive stuff. A beautifully, tastefully done lemon/romance that I'm sure even those who stray from lemons would enjoy! I hope to find and read more like this. |
Reviewed By: Dryad Chick On: November 29, 2001 21:00 EST
Comment/Review:
very wordy and naughty but all the same its good. |
