| "Renaissance" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this fic. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: White Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, yeah!!! I loved this chapter! I really enjoyed it when Gohan and Trunks found their fathers going at it. Hehehe... keep at it! |
Reviewed By: Maho Tenshi On: September 10, 2003 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a great story, please continue? You are a good writer, I found only a few tiny mistakes (hense the 8 in grammer and spelling) and it is one of the more creative things I've read. Which is saying a lot since I read a lot of fan-fics. Well, write more.
Dawn Jasper |
Reviewed By: candy00 On: September 01, 2003 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey awsome fic, I luv it!! I cant wait to read what happens next so write again VERY soon |
Reviewed By: PixieStick On: August 30, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love ur fic!!! its so good!! u gotta update again tomorrow!! i am such a HUGE fan of goku/vegeta parings!! especially lemons XD theyre tha best...next to hiei/kurama. its pretty sad how bulma and chi-chi r such bitches and call them fags and shit...i just wanna grab a metal bat and beat em both to a bloody pulp! >.< anyways!!!!!!! update again soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cooly. Me like Mmm Hmm, very very good ^_^ And I know how you feel; I hate school too. Ruins EVERYTHING. |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 16:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it so far. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 12:35 CST
Comment/Review:
ooo... this is looking promising. ^_^ there are a few spelling errors, but its easily enough to follow!
keep up the good work!
i'll be back for the next chap! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 06:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm... quite a few jumps, kinda rough, a bit OOC in Goku's POV, some grammar errors... but I like G/V enough so that I'll stick around. It isn't unreadable, just a tad rough. |
