Reviewed By: M@flo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 03:36 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story. I like it, it's very original. However you've got major spelling problems. Ok, no offense it's just that it's kinda anoying when you're reading a story w/ tons of spelling problems.
Otherwise it's really good! Update soon! |
