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"Stealing your heart and your kingdom" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ]
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 Title: Ohh!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 20, 2005 23:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
You had me going there a few times! Thank god that rollar coaster of emotion is over. Great job I really felt their pain.
 Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 18, 2003 20:10 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The ending really was kind of lame, but over all it was a nice plot. If you'd gone into more details it would have been much better. All you need is practice and you'll be really good.
 Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 15, 2003 11:11 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahhh, it was great. I'm so glad she didn't die, I knew she wouldn't, though. Please hurry, I really want to know what else happens. PLEASE!!!!
 Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 20, 2003 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahhhh, that was wonderful. Evil, evil cliffy-sorta-thing, though. I know that can't be it, so you know. Oh, and there were a lot of spelling and grammar errors in here. If you would like a beta reader my e-mail is theoujismate@yahoo.com; I would enjoy helping you out. Manda
 Reviewed By: Angelluss  On: October 16, 2003 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it....please give me more i'm addicted
 Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 16, 2003 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Title: stealing your heart and your kingdom
Reviewed By: nancy86  On: September 28, 2003 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is a really great story i hope that u well keep going
 Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 26, 2003 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhh! No, that was so EVIL! Pleas, PLEASE hurry with the next chappy!
 Title: anony
Reviewed By: outtadaloop [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 24, 2003 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great B/V fic here! I'm surprised that Bulma and Vegeta are very much in character... but what's Veggie doing not reacting to Bulma's confession? Plz plz update soon!
 Title: very good
Reviewed By: mickydrpepper14 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 10, 2003 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very very good. cant wait for more. so keep up the good work. =)
 Reviewed By: Sashia  On: September 10, 2003 20:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep it up
 Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 10, 2003 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
As usual, I love it. Please hurry with your next update, and Vegeta better swallow that pride dammit!! Lol, I can't wait to find out what happens!! Oh, and thanks for getting us the updates so quickly!!!
 Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 05, 2003 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Of course you should make a new chapter. You've got a die-hard fan here!! I love your story! Please keep it up, I an't wait for the next chapter!! (your Engish is fine, don't worry about it)
 Reviewed By: gemini66  On: September 04, 2003 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hell ya you should do a new chapter
 Reviewed By: gemini66  On: September 04, 2003 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
should waist your time making a new chapter was your question well my answer is
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