| "Faith in Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Cyas On: August 05, 2005 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story really wasn't all that interesting. You proved that you have some basic knowledge of the canon. I can see where people get the idea, but Marth and Roy really don't know each other. The chances of a person meeting both of them would be slim to none. Marth is also supposed to come off as a little arrogant to people he doesn't know, too (a player can tell this from even the basic knowledge from SSBM). Anyway, your characterization was also rushed, and you seemed to give us some pretty useless information about Mary. You do describe pretty well, but work on characterizing. I realize that it is a one shot, so characterization might seemed rushed no matter what (seeing as you are working with an original character). I'd also like to know just how much you know about FE's canon. By the way, since there is a European-ish setting in this series, I seriously doubt the characters would speak or understand Japanese.
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Reviewed By: Forever Yours [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 16:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, thanks for reviewing, everyone! ^_^ I'll continue to write the story as it keeps on coming to my head!
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Reviewed By: DragonWarrior On: March 28, 2004 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the greatest fanfics iv'e ever read!!! Please write more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Peachs hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all,I like this fic.One of my favorites.I (personally) like Roy and at least know most of the characters.I'm just wandering when are you going to write more?
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Reviewed By: Nyuso On: January 01, 2004 04:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good job. I like this a lot. Write more soon
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Reviewed By: Aileen [Mediaminer Member who's too lazy to get off her butt and login] On: September 20, 2003 14:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story. The way you described things was very well written. What'll happen to Roy? Write more please! |
Reviewed By: Animegurl On: June 14, 2003 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is soooo good I wanna wanna read chapter five! |
Reviewed By: Animegurl On: June 14, 2003 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is soooo good I wanna wanna read chapter five! |
