| "Ragnarok" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: jennamarie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um WOW! I'm not so much reviewing as giving praie. I'm facinated, hooked, addicted, and awed! I hope you will update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very interesting start. I'm still a bit confused about the whole story. I guess you'll explain it in time ^_^. Your style is a bit hard to follow, but alas it's nice. Not bad. Really original in my opinion. Hisoka as a girl ::grins:: Damn cute. Watari is so cute in here ^__^. Overall I find this quite a mystery fic.
Please update soon and keep it up!!! |
Reviewed By: nemmy On: June 07, 2003 01:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
continue ne? this is very good... 'soka-chan, lol...
luv
Nemmy |
Reviewed By: BlueBlaze On: April 04, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay Shinnite! *Grins* Well, I can say that I can't wait for the next chapters and until then I may be stuck to the computer waiting for them. *Waits* It's worth it! ^_^ Yay! |
Reviewed By: ember_fang [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! Write more please!(I'm not kidding bout the rating, you really do write well!) |
Reviewed By: falsechaos@mail.com On: March 29, 2003 21:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I do believe we have a professional-quality writer hiding out at mediaminer. Where do I start? [rubs hands in delight] Do you write poetry? If not I definately see the potential to do so. Everything was so lyrically written. You have an excellent grasp on conveying mood and setting. The two darknesses, for example. Good, comforting dark and scary, I'm-gonna-die dark.
I really love the way you've handled the chara, Hisoka in particular. The use of his empathy, especially when he meets the tenshi, is very creatively done. Tsuzuki is also in chara, which is harder than it sounds. The balance between his natural goofiness and his almost fierce loyalty towards those he cares about was well done.
I look forward to the next installment of what I hope is a long series. I'd offer my services as beta, but I'm not sure I could keep up with the standard of quality you've established with the first chap. Keep writing! |
