Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2001 22:33 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very good story. I think your right, there is just something about making Vegeta suffer that fanfic author's love. But then again since everything ticks Vegeta off anyway there's really nothing we can do avoid it, right? :) Anyway I love the loved te fic good job. |