| "November Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Chris The Anime Guy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 13:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey peeps! Sorry I haven't been able to do this story for such a long time. With family probs and having to move house and stuffy I haven't had time, but I'm glad to see some liked it alittle :) I might actually re-write this fic 'cause I gotta agree with Chris R, I never did do enough description ^^; We'll see what happens^^ Watch this space! Thanks for the review Chris R ^-^ Chris The Anime Guy
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Reviewed By: Chris R. On: July 28, 2004 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was just looking through the old stories and found this. well it's not half bad if i say so myself. the only problem is that things seem to happen too fast. in my opinion at least. kitsune seems to fall in love to fast and seems a little out of charactor. it would be better to have a little transactoon between the two before she falls head over heels for him. otherwise it may look rushed. the overall detail and stroy seems fiarly good, however you may want to stretch out scenes a little to give you story more structure and "fatten" it up a little. hope you havent givn up on this story, it could be really good. one last thing, the fight with motoko needed a little more discription. he may be good but THAT good? i don't know. hoping for more Chris R.
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Reviewed By: Chris The Anime Guy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 12:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I know the song 'November Rain' isn't in it yet.
I'm planning on putting it in soon.
Please review guys.
please? |
