| "From An Alley" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should do a sequence it was really good .
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Reviewed By: inuyhakmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have talent but I think that you wrapped uo the story too soon maybe could have said something like them gettinmg married and having kids |
Reviewed By: Joe Diamonds On: June 12, 2003 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of writing: You captured the reader in a truly dramatic way.
Spelling and grammer: You made litle to no mistakes. Exelent work.(I wasn't counting, but I think you only made two. o.0)
Enjoyment factor: I really loved this fic.
Overall rateing: What do you think? Stupid human. |
Reviewed By: Joe Diamonds On: June 12, 2003 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of writing: You captured the reader in a truly dramatic way.
Spelling and grammer: You made litle to no mistakes. Exelent work.(I wasn't counting, but I think you only made two. o.0)
Enjoyment factor: I really loved this fic.
Overall rateing: What do you think. Stupid human. |
Reviewed By: Sorrow On: June 10, 2003 22:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok that was good sniff it made me cry yo. hehe good job |
Reviewed By: OMG!!!!! On: May 16, 2003 20:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG GREAT STORY PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL U GET ALOT OF REVEIWS FOR THE SEQUEL AND PLEASE PUT SOME MORE LEMON IN THE SEQUEL!!!HAI!!! |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is.....omg....in a good way though!! I'm like speechless |
Reviewed By: New York On: May 02, 2003 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i think u did really really good on this fic! o dont care wut anyone else thinks...lol i liked it...it was so cute :} iight well lataz
Raquel~aka~New York |
Reviewed By: Chibi Mizu Tenshi On: April 08, 2003 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic!! I usually don't like AU's, but this one really caught my attention. And I thought the plot was perfect! Sometimes, simple and sweat is all you need ^_^ You rock! |
Reviewed By: darkness~ On: April 06, 2003 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaa..that was really good eh..^^
kekeke..~ inu and kag are soo sweet!! and to think that all this can happen just from the alley incident!! ya did a great job!! |
Reviewed By: kagome3112@hotmail.com On: March 31, 2003 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...No flames here!!!! I really enjoyed this story but I didn't want it to end!! Would you mind if I posted this on my web-site??? I really loved this story. but I think you should do a sequel...when they have kids and stuff..that would be soo kool.
kagome3112@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: Muzi Suki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 16:40 CST
Comment/Review:
You are an awesome writer!!!!! You should definelty write more or write a sequel or something!!!!!! This story is so awesome!!!! |
Reviewed By: luna_night [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was most certainly a different kind of story and as a writer you never know what is going to happen until it is over...i did really enjoy reading your story and i like it the way it is i wouldnt change anything....
best of luck
luna_night |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
A nice story. It's got some really sweet moments.
...but why? Since this was an A.U., why an Inu and Kagome A.U.? It seems to me that you could just as easily have written in some original characters, done some developing, and come up with a story completely your own. Was Inuyasha just a place to start from? This story, while fun to read and entertaining (which is not to be underestimated; that's the point, after all) doesn't give us any insight on the Inuyasha characters. |
Reviewed By: Jess On: March 28, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chp! I can't believe the police can be so careless. (^_^) |
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