| "Such a Perfect World?" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: elpowermoe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. I can't wait for the rest of the story!
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Title: continue
Reviewed By: jagball57 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue
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Title: Comment/Review
Reviewed By: Gatomon Rules On: July 15, 2005 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahem?Did you listen to these poor souls at all?PLEASE< I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!Write more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dai-Veemon On: December 12, 2004 12:56 CST
Comment/Review:
finish it! finish it! finish it! finish it! finish it! finish it! finish it! finish it! finish it! finish it! finish it! finish it! finish it!
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Reviewed By: ladysunlight On: January 06, 2004 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: lilangel On: January 01, 2004 04:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEEASE DO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
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Reviewed By: jackie On: May 14, 2003 03:27 CDT
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Reviewed By: Loki On: March 22, 2003 19:21 CST
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Intersting premise. It's pretty cool to reflect on if a certain event hadn't happened, IMHO. Love fics like this. ^_^
-Loki |
Reviewed By: digifreak On: March 22, 2003 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is the best story i very had the fortune of reading write more soon or watch out |
Reviewed By: ladybird2223 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 11:03 CST
Comment/Review:
well, who can refuse to review with such a pleading. I think this story has a great start to it. I've often wondered about parallell universes and this caught my attention right away. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
