| "Beyond Believing" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Beyond Believing
Reviewed By: Unseen Watcher [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I wish you would write a follow-up on this oneshot. Her taking on Akito in a card game before tricking him into consenting. Them dropping the bomb on the rest of the Sohma's (and Tohru) at a dinner or something. The expression on Shigure's face! It'll be priceless! AHHH!!
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Reviewed By: Ohimesama On: April 12, 2003 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* this is such a lovely and engaging lemon! one that's not just two people going at it but has lot of angst and emotion put into the overall sex ^_^ and yeah i definitely think you could make a sequel from this story!
Hatori and Hana! Who would have thought indeed!
so glad you came up with it and had the creativity to pull this pairing *I certainly buy the potential with these two*
Hatori's so sexy! *sparkles* and hana's mysterious beauty fits him so well! ^___^ |
Reviewed By: yume_no_kanari [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 17:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved this! A very well-done lemon, with an actual plot! I'd liike to see another. |
Reviewed By: Kara On: March 31, 2003 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! this was so sexy! hana rocks! |
Reviewed By: Rei On: March 26, 2003 22:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Hana-chan finally gets some action! Hooray!! After reading fic after fic of Tohru pairings, it's really nice to read one about another character! Please continue, but try not to make it angsty ok? *yea!* |
