| "Found in the Mist" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vejiita's Demon On: March 22, 2003 22:11 CST
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Wow.. what a bitch. They should have shot her, just for kicks. I have to say, I really like this fic, never saw Trunks get accused for being an andriod. Great idea. Update soon |
Reviewed By: AMCM74 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 22:02 CST
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You finally posted this you know I dont like misty evil little thing. breaking the lavender boy's heart. Wish his dad back fromthe grave to final flash her |
Reviewed By: Jamz On: March 22, 2003 21:52 CST
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I like this story, to see what happens with Trunks after he has gone back to the future for good.
I can see why everyone fears him and thinks he is an android. Only them had could fly and had that kinda strength, though I don't see Trunks taking it lying down.
can't wait to see more |
Reviewed By: Mari On: March 23, 2003 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
J!!!!! J!!!!! POOR TRUNKS! O.O! I am speechless! That was good. Ok, beyond good. That has to be one of the best stories I have ever read. Right now I want to grab Misty go ssj and kick her behind.
Heh ^.^; Sorry, the fangirl is coming out in me good job!!! I can't wait for more. POST MORE SOON! I order you! Heh... For the awesome work I send you pocky! *Hands it to J*
~Mari~ |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: March 22, 2003 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very promising start. I love Trunks in this fic...especially his interaction with Bulma...and I love the cliffhanger ending of Chap. 1.
Can't wait for more! |
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