"Troubles" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: May 03, 2004 16:37 CDT Comment/Review: ooo... that was really good^^ *shiver* u should continue this^^
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Reviewed By: Gokuu On: February 12, 2004 11:29 CST Comment/Review: Um... it wasn't something that I really liked, but I could soo see it as a manga. It sounds like a lot of the yaoi mangas that I have read. Find someone who can draw this and you might just have something to peak my interest. Just babbling... I might not be much better... bai.
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Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 01:53 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: It's not bad, really. I liked it. A little short though and rushed but the flow fits with the story. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: angelic_yokai On: October 17, 2003 16:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh, the joy!! i love this fic...i have read it at least 5 times. gojyoxhakkai are pure yummy? I think you should write more. very good writing style and sentence structure as well
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Reviewed By: Kamui No Miko On: March 24, 2003 07:45 CST Comment/Review: Sigh...If only they had fics like this more often..
Interesting thoughts from Gojyo that..Good Job. :) |
Reviewed By: Rei On: March 24, 2003 06:28 CST Comment/Review: Whaaaaa!! This fiction is very very good!! |