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"Final Fantasy Seven: Shadows of the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
Title: reponse to yami no eyes Reviewed By: Author On: October 28, 2003 12:37 CST Comment/Review: This isn't exactly a fanfic >.> but an RPG turned into a novel.. most of the characters in Arc I don't last past Arc II.. and there's a ways to go before Vince & Cid.. say.. IV or V Arc I believe.
Reviewed By: Yami no Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 02:53 CST Comment/Review: Has potential, but you need to tone down the Mary Sues quite a bit. Have them show up slowly, prove that they aren't Mary Sues. Show them that they're interesting, but not attention hogs. PS: I am interested in this because I can't get enugh Cid/Vince. What chapter is that in?

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