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"The 2nd Battle city Tournament" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ]
 Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang  On: September 23, 2005 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am a big fan of Yugioh. So, as one Inuyugi fan(fan of Inuyasha and Yugioh X-overs) to another, let me disect this fic. Too short. The dueling guy i stupid to not set Magic Cylinder, and a DMG attack combined with OOkazi only does 2800 damage. So I think you seriously need to rewrite this.
 Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 03, 2005 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's short but good. It's about time Anzu won another dual. Heh, that was funny how she won so easily. This was okay. Don't listen to any flames, this is okay, just do something to make it interesting. That WAS kinda' short, and yes, I'm one to lose faith when no one updates for that long. I blame the flames for your absence.
 Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 25, 2004 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
BIG_DADDY: Ah... um... I'm not quite sure what to make of this fic. Arucard: It's nothing but crap and more crap! BIG_DADDY: Nicely said but that's not what I was thinking of. I mean, this person's calculations in LP are WAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYY off. And no one could be defeated that easily unless the other person somehow cheated. It's obvious that this person isn't going to continue this fic seeing as how they haven't updated in 7 months. And actually, I think it was me who was posing as E-101 Beta. Shadow Lupine and Vampire Kitty: DIE!!!!!!! (Advance on him with weapons but BIG_DADDY used author power and forms a shield which holds them off and is putting in little effort. Arucard sneaks up behing them and sucks their blood killing them) BIG_DADDY: However, if you want to take some dueling lessons from me then read my fic "My Battle City Tournament" and see how a real tournament is done.
 Title: yea
Reviewed By: Shadow Lupine [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 08, 2003 17:17 CST
Comment/Review:
yeah, dont listen to him. Short but sweet! i like it, plz write more and update soon!!!!
 Title: The 2nd battle city tournament
Reviewed By: Vampire Kitty  On: November 21, 2003 23:31 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
To the author, Don't listen to that other guy he's full of bullshit!!! Please continue with the story I'm haning here!
 Reviewed By: E-101 Beta  On: October 12, 2003 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is the worst story I have read. I mean, come on, I could write a better story than this.

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