| "Red velvet rope" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I must say, that was unexpected. Sort of... Anyway, very well written. Incredibly well detailed lemon, absolutely mind-blowing on that side of things. I was like, 'wow, now this is a really good lemon' You really got into the sexual mindset during sex. Excellent use of descriptions, excellent use of foreshadowing too. As for Marron, what a lil' minx. ^^;
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Reviewed By: suzuka_13 On: September 22, 2003 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. The ending completely shocked me. I love being shocked. Keep writing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Yxonomei [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kinky! |
Reviewed By: Kunochan On: April 09, 2003 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy mother of god, I haven't read that ...squicky? ...bad? whatever... of a lemon since I left the Gundam Wing fandom.
And no, I do not mean the pairing. |
Reviewed By: Purple Mist [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmm, naughty and lemony fresh! I don't know why, but I always loved this couple desides Carrot and Tira. This was a delight to read!^_^!! |
