| "Mommy" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Sesshy85 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2011 18:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply wonderful |
Title: DarkDemonHuntress
Reviewed By: DarkDemonHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 17:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
CONTINUE!! I MUST KNOW MORE!!
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Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 21:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great fanfic, very original. I absolutley love it.
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Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 12:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very romantic fic. I can't get over little Sesshomaru crying like a puppy dog. That's so adorable. I look forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: Sinu-Yasha On: June 27, 2003 01:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love please continue. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 14:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the elegant tone of this piece, but there are some situations in which the characters probably would not be quite so formal with each other...
The end of chapter four is amazing! Aisuru offers to show Sesshoumaru how to read people, and he immediately shows her that in a way, he already can. If that's a vieled insult, then it's extremely adept.
Odd how Sess seems so enthusiastic about micro-Yash. Hard to picture this cute kid as the wrathful Fluffy we know and love. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 20:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Subdued and elegant. I imagine that's how a full-inuyoukai noble child would cry, but somehow I can't picture Sess crying at all. |
Reviewed By: KANGEL On: March 26, 2003 11:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M IMPRESSED BY UR STORY BUT WHO IS WHO. WHO IS THE LORD OF THE WESTERN LANDS AND IS AISURU HER REAL NAME BECAUSE AT THE BOTTEM WHERE THE GLORSSY IS IT MEANS LOVELY DARGTER SO PLEASE TELL ME WHO IS WHO BECAUSE IT GETS CONFUSING A LITTLE BECAUSE PEAPLE SAY THAT SESS. IS THE LORD OF THE WESTERN LANDS BUT ONE OF UR REVEIW SAY THAT AISURU ITS INUYASHA'S BUT THAT WOULD MEAN THAT THE LORD OF THE WESTERN LANDS IS INUYASHA'S FATHER SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON BECAUSE THAT MIGHT ANSWER SOME OF MY QUESTIONS PLEASE PUT 2 CHAP. UP NEXT TIME SO READES WILL GET THE STORY AND WHO IS IN THE STORY IF U DO THAT YOU WILL GET MORE REVEIWS FOR THIS STORY. UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: YOUKAIGIRL143 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 20:21 EST
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keep writing its a good fic so keep writing |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 22:13 EST
Comment/Review:
Looks promising. Elegant.
Aisuru is her name or a term of endearment?
So this could be Inuyasha's mom, but that's by no means the only possibility... |
Reviewed By: ShellBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 21:51 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job, you've caught my eye with this story keep up the great work. |
