| "An Oni's Curse" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this. It was very original especially in the way she was turned into a full demon and her being able to pick out the one heart to destroy her adversary was truly amazing. I am really looking forward to more on this pairing.
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Title: DETAILS
Reviewed By: hissori tenshi no benishi On: May 19, 2004 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
kay its good really good but your only fault is detail u need to detail these things more! in example, when u say kagome, in her true demon form which is a giant white dog i assume since u said she looked like sess, was gentler in appereance i can imagine that (sort of). i highly doubt this but how many peeps have seen sess in his true form? ive only seen it once (not including poorly drawn pictures) because not many know what he looks like, i meen i had to guess what kagome had transfomed into! my only hints being that she transformed looking like sess.
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Reviewed By: Fluffyluva On: May 15, 2004 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good job please keep it up your very good KEEP IT UP
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Reviewed By: kasue On: October 26, 2003 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update as soon as you can because your fanfic is really cool. Bye
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaruboi On: July 21, 2003 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is that it?
If not and it better be not, please continue the story. I really really want to know what happens. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: June 26, 2003 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update...Or I will have your head. *Flexes my claw and grins* |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 11:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh no I can`t take it!
Another great story from you and it`s the same as it`s with your other fic!
Maybe their just as lazy as I and are going to update soon cause your stories are very good!
Soo very please don`t give up now!Maybe you should consider to put up your story at ff.net too, cause I have to say that I know many people who just visit ff.net and they`re all Sess/Kag fanatics like me!I think that would increase your audience cause it`s seems to me that there are a whole bunch more Sess/Kag fic on ff.net than here and consequentially more viewer for stories with this pairing!Well think about it!
Keep on writing
Ja ne
*kagomesirene* |
Reviewed By: Naheka On: April 05, 2003 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Deo! Naheka here! ^_^
I am very impressed with vocabulary usage! It's as if you were actually paying attention in English class! (that course is BLASPHEMY! BLASPHEMY I TELL YOU!!! And if you really don't pay attention, don't worry because I don't, either)
Much awesome-ness there be here, but drat! I do have some suggestions for improvement. I would reccomend describing the action in the begining scene in more active detail. It kinda' went by me in a blur. But other than that, I have a strong feeling that there is a great writer in you! ^_^
Keep on writing!
~Naheka
PS: Didja' read my stupid fanfiction, yet? I might post it up here... see what happens. Meep! |
Reviewed By: claudia67g On: April 05, 2003 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm
Pretty good,
I think Sess and Kagome would of been a WEEE bit more upset about the lacing.
This is really good overall and im very interested in seeing the rest of your story.
((mm.org has been acting up maybe this is why no one has voted yet))
PUt up another chappie and lets see what happens.
I love kagome sess pairings and this seems to be very interesting.
(( what about shippo )) |
Reviewed By: lying promises On: April 03, 2003 16:51 CST
Comment/Review:
I am writing this to let people know I will not update until I get my minimum amount of reviews. hehe I'm evil. Sorry but I haven't loged in yet. |
Reviewed By: obssesivefangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is really really really good & i really really really hope u get the next chappy up soon!!!
Ja Ne^_^ |
