| "My Last Breath" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O omg. i'm gonna seriously go cry now. its a great fic! the overall rating is a 9 coz now i'm sad. awwwwwww, but it was so sweet! yoji's revalations in the story were very in character, along w/aya's. you're good at that (unlike alot of ppl). but it was so sad!!! :cries: okay i'm gonna go read something happy now =^^= keep writing!!!
|
Reviewed By: Spawn of Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 15:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
good fic... its nice that when yohji begins to speak Aya says he already knows... romantic and touching...
|
Reviewed By: Huge Aya/Yohji Fan(orY/A) On: October 12, 2003 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll just have you know that it made me cry...
|
Reviewed By: Huge Aya/Yohji Fan(orY/A) On: October 12, 2003 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll just have you know that it made me cry...
|
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 11:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read it again. I did cry this time. *snifflesobwipeseyes* So sad.. Very good. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Crimson Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vampire Louie, Red here (from the group). Just wanted to let you know this was a well written deathfic. I luv your fics and I am now a fan of yours. Red |
Reviewed By: Shiroki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 07:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
...but hell, i loved it. keep it up. =) |
Reviewed By: Shiroki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 07:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
ow shit, this hurt. *winces and smiles sadly*
it was a well-written piece, ne... keep up the good work... *cringes again and sighs* |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 02:24 CST
Comment/Review:
*whimper* Sho sad... I almost cried... *sniffle* *pets the boys and whimpers more* |
Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tragically beautiful piece of writing. I absolutely loved it and it made me cry *sniffs and blows her nose* You touched that soft spot inside of me and that is rare. A few authors here have managed it and you are one of them. Aya was perfectly wonderful with the way he held our Youji in his arms and Youji's thoughts and words were just right. Great writing Lou-chan. I loved this.
Viva La Resistance AYYA *waves the AYYA banner* |
Reviewed By: Scented Candles [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 02:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* wow! wonderful story...so sad...keep up the great writing! This is absolutely heartwrenching! |
