| "Eternal Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that's so not right!!! ROFL! Okay, you gotta stop writing these! *pokes Raven* You're gonna have ME writing Truntens soon. *shakes head*
Niceness! *applauds* |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 11:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
bwahahaha! love the ending! I read so many of these where Vegeta walks in on them it was a refreshing change. good job. |
Reviewed By: Black Panther On: April 05, 2003 04:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stops cracking up*Very good,eventhough I m not a romance fun,I liked it a lot.Trunks and Goten -in the end of dbz-is my fave couple.Smart ending (and funny)! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 21:02 CST
Comment/Review:
BWAaaahahahahaaa! I could see the punchline coming a mile away but it was still hilarious. Loverly job! |
Reviewed By: jessica On: March 25, 2003 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooved the ending, made me laugh a lot! I also thought it was well written. Good job. |
Reviewed By: Star Spangle Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 11:38 CST
Comment/Review:
*dances around* Yeeah!! Trunks didn't turn out like the horny bastard that you thought he was going to here! I loved it of course!! I really loved the end...I can imagine the grin on Poopsie's face when Bulma came in *insert shit eating grin* yummmmmy another lovely story Raven!! |
Reviewed By: Ginia On: March 27, 2003 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT!! I really needed a good laugh and a good lemon - so sweet of you to put them together for me.
Bravo!!!!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2003 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the ending of this. this was great and just perfect. I wonder if Vegeta had known before all of this? Lol well any way keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2003 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pikcs herself off of the floor after falling from her chair from laughing so hard*
Raven my dear, you are so damn good at this!! Wish I could write something sweet and fluffy like that.. but alas, I have no talent for romance! *mock faint*
The re-write is awesome ^_^ I liked the origional too, JUST SO U KNOW *poke*
anywho... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! WRITE ANOTHER SOON! |
