"Everyone's Entitled to a Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vega -Lume [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 09:53 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: you promised I could archive this when it was finished *five years later* PLEASE FINISH!!
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Reviewed By: Vega-Lume On: January 14, 2004 17:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OHH! I love Heero angst. I hope you write more soon or prepare to be stalked by the Little Chibi Demon ( * CacKlEs MaDLy *) serously, great story! P.s. the pop-ups when printing on your other site suck!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 04, 2003 11:59 CST Comment/Review: I hope Wufei can get at the bottom of this. Keep up th good job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 05, 2003 11:21 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh, wow! They are now face to face and I'm dying to know what will happen next. Keep up the good job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: 2x1 freak On: October 05, 2003 00:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is no doubt one of the greatests fics i've read, and trust me, i read about ten every day. You MUST continue to the next chapter REALLY soon, I just have to know what happens. I hope you put Duo through a guilt trip and chuck in some more Heero-angst ^_^. That was all I could think of after chapter six, I really don't thing Hee-chan should forgive him easily, Duo doesn't deserve such a quick fix-up after what he did to poor Hee-chan. Well now I'm just rambling.... and I'm too lazy to log on. Maybe I'll do that for the next time i review. BYE! -YAOI ANGEL
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Reviewed By: teenage dirtbag On: October 04, 2003 19:15 CDT Comment/Review: mr maxwell...eep duo has some major ass kissing to do
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 03, 2003 14:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I like this fic. Update soon and keep up the great job. |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 08:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: keep-up the good work kay,...and please make duo Suuuuffferrrrrrrr a
lil bit more before he could get heero forgivness kay??....continue soon please!!!!
^.~ |
Reviewed By: Yaoi Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 06:25 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Loved it! You must continue REALLY soon! I just absolutely, positively, definetely and enthusiasticlly LOVE Heero-Angst/torture and UKE-heero! ^__^
Hope I didn't scare you with that!
Anyway, This fic is absolutely awesome, it's just the type of fic I've been looking for! great job! Please Write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2003 19:15 CDT Comment/Review: *pokes* Oi... You ARE gonna continue this, right? If you don't, I'll have to um... Um... Do something really bad. Or...something. *blinks* Yeah.
Please update soon. Your fans are literally begging you. |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 20:56 CDT Comment/Review: yay, another chapter, love it, can't wait till the next chapter is out. |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: April 12, 2003 00:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: well,...serves duo right if he ever meet
heero again and heero would give him the cold shoulder Nee??...*grins*...i can't wait to see what duo gona do to win heero heart again,...in other words,..beg heero to give him a second chance,...[just like the title of this fic]...i don't think heero would give-in soo easily next time,...duo've hurt heero badly,...it will take more,...MUCH more than saying "i'm sorry" to win heero over again,...duo got his work cut-out for him,....and hope heero will give HELL for leaving like that,...*evil grins*...continue soon kay,...and next time,...i wana see duo turn gettin TORTURED by heero kay,...keep-up the good work,...till next chapter,..Jaaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaaaanbbbbaaatteeeeeeee-Neeeeee!!^.~!! |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 22:07 CDT Comment/Review: yay, another chapter, Poor, Poor Heero, can't wait till the next chapter. I really love it. |
Reviewed By: noi On: April 11, 2003 17:17 CDT Comment/Review: die duo, die!! how could he leave heero like that!!! anywayz, liking this fic so far! good good, keep up ur wonderful writing! |
Reviewed By: Lita On: April 11, 2003 15:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The others are probably going to notice Heero shutting them out again.... I can't believe Duo left Heero though.... anyway... Plez continue this soon! I'll be checking for updates! |
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