| "I saw red" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: leelee On: July 07, 2003 17:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww...that is so sweet...awwwww...^-^ Poor Goten...he deserves so much better. Thank goodness Trunks was there. Man, why do the really hot ones have to be such bastards? ^^;; Tsk tsk tsk. I love my Mirai Tunkie-kins to pieces, but honestly...such unfaithfulness...claiming he loved Goten and Gohan both. Hm, he probably doesn't love either of them. Or...he loves them both and just can't decide. Yeah, I'll just give him the benefit of the doubt. Keeps me sane. ^_~ Super fic! Very good job! I loved it!!! |
Reviewed By: Iyasu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was so wrong of Tora and Gohan. They should pay for it... by means of being beaten severely with torture!... Um... I'm okay... I loved the fic! Please continue. |
Reviewed By: 4*eyes On: June 06, 2003 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gasp you have to write this story soon it sounds great but what is up with Tora and Gohan they where kinda mean |
Reviewed By: SirPsychoSexy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, a wonderful piece of yaoi! Damn, you sure can write these things!
And the first time I read it, I wasn't expecting Gohan...but it kinda sounds like him.
All in all, pretty sweet and very sexy. Hope you continue.
-Armand |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I ADORE this fic!! It is so sad, and so sweet, and just so wonderful!! That last line that Trunks speaks is just SO SWEET!! And his little speech when he finds Goten in the forest!! ~grabs another Kleenex~ And of course the mini lemons were SO HOT, Tora's such a sleaze! Just an excellent fic!! Of course the fact that it is set to one of my all time favorite songs didn't hurt it a bit!! ^.^
Can't WAIT for the next installment!!! |
