| "Master PC 1/2" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarkJackel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The sebuction scene seems to be going rather well, can't wait for Ranma to flip the tables on Hinako. Seducing a seducer has its novelty but it probably shouldn't become is sole/main means of acquiring women. Next Ranma should pay off his debts of honor (i.e.: claim Ukyo next). Then, Genma's evils repaid, he can claim the other two, leaving the one who made his life more Hell for last. I hope Kasumi gets a naughty nurse outfit, maybe even be able to wear it in public.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: iatnehfognik [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 03:25 CDT
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Its good to see you didn't plan to abandon this harem fic...there aren't too much harem fics out there and most of them are unfinished or gotten repeatitive after a while like Table Turned..Its good to see your imagination band did not run low..keep it up Ho-Iatneh
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Title: You Going to finish?
Reviewed By: DrewB1442 On: May 15, 2006 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know it's a couple of years old, but it's a good story. I hope you will finish it.
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Reviewed By: HVulpes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 20:21 CST
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I made a fix of the first chapter with a copy of my fic from a better source. I hope this and my other works help. Thanks. Hvulpes
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Reviewed By: EvlMoogle On: November 18, 2004 19:59 CST
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For God's sake, learn to make paragraphs!
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Title: The Otaku
Reviewed By: Fionn On: November 16, 2004 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first chapter is all but impossible to read due to bad formatting and no paragraph breaks. Also there are a number of spelling mistakes and the actual content is rush, lacking in detail or just plain bland in places. Further more Ranma would not atomaticaly add Kodachi to a harem because she frigten him a little, she all the bad points of his other fiancee's and none of there good points. In adition to which her brother is a madman who wants to kill Ranma's male form and bed Ranma's female form, her father is a tropical Fruicake who often torments Ranma and other students in adition to being obssesed with shaveing Ranma's head.
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Reviewed By: sparkyaf On: November 12, 2004 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Keep up the good work. This is definitly not your everyday fanfic. I'm really interested in how ukyo and shampoo are going to be affected. Keep writing please
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Reviewed By: def3PO On: October 26, 2004 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story.
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Title: Pagekeeper
Reviewed By: Thearon On: April 18, 2004 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Much better than chapter one. you have a very good storyline. Glad i kept up with your story. keep up the good work.
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Title: Pagekeeper
Reviewed By: Thearon On: April 18, 2004 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now it was a very well written work. Except for the fact you didn't paragraph at all it almost came across as one long sentence. In your future works i suggest you space them out better. heres hoping you continue your worki it seems interesting so far.
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Reviewed By: mol On: February 19, 2004 16:43 CST
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keep up the good work! It's great.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron On: June 02, 2003 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! i myself read the Master PC in a different site bheh heh
Now it gets the Rana treatment
Man i enjoyed this so far DONT QUIT NOW!!!! |
Reviewed By: Genofan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 21:53 CDT
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This is rather a different type of story. I've always liked rather unique ideas. |
Reviewed By: jetfowl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 06:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most worthless piece of donkey dung I have ever had the misfortune to access. Please stop writing this. |
Reviewed By: jetfowl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 06:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most worthless piece of donkey dung I have ever had the misfortune to access. Please stop writing this. |
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