| "The Death of the moon" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 18:20 CST
Comment/Review:
i love this story you HAVE to continue it, im dying to see the end!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaruboi On: July 22, 2003 09:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that I am being a pain in the neck, but please continue the story. |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the dreams, I had a feeling it was HIM all along. :) I don't want to spoil it for the others who read the story. |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the plot about how to separate Hinako and Kagome. This is truly well thought out. My only concern is that the parts are not in order. But otherwise each part is well done. |
