| "Reflected Image" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Solo On: June 24, 2002 22:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
You're not working on this anymore are you? You're probably not even reading this. Oh-well, I put my 2 cents worth in any way. YOU SHOULD FINISH THIS, WHO CARES WHAT THE PICKY PEOPLE SAY!! |
Reviewed By: Rose Thorne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2001 11:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You REALLY need to work on spelling. You misspelled Kuwabara's name, Ningenkai, ningen. I'd suggest finding a beta reader. Also, it's split up and hard to read. |
Reviewed By: Scichan Hirameki On: October 21, 2001 06:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very Interesting...Very nice...The world is called the Reikai teh use of ki is reiki for ningens. Try to spell out better |
