| "Dessert Flower" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: sinclair [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 06:41 CST
Comment/Review:
go on with this ficcie, i like it alot! bakurasgirl seem 2 be writing alot of reviews...u ppl related or is it just the name similarity stuff? anyway write on,i'm waiting 4 the next chap!
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Reviewed By: Sibilant Spirit On: April 08, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting fic. enjoyed it a lot. |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 17:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOT MY BISHIE MALIK!!!!!!!!! *hugs Malik too tightly* X_X Oopsies. sorry. Cool. Can't wait to see how you kill off Malik! |
Reviewed By: mariksgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 23:16 CST
Comment/Review:
its just me and i wanted to say hi to every one |
Reviewed By: OUTLAWSTAR On: April 03, 2003 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I READ CHAPTER 4 . YOU DID HAVE SOME TYPOS LIKE INSTEAD OF THOUGH YOU PUT THOUGHT. BUT OVERALL I LIKE YOUR STORY CUZ ITS DESCIPTIVE AND ITS NOT BORING :) |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 12:04 CST
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Are you aware that your title (Dessert Flower) is misspelled? Or did you really mean a flower that one eats after a meal -- you know, as in "dessert"? That really dry place with all the sand is called a DESERT. One 's'. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 06:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get the next chappie up! This is really a good story! It really is and I love your POV. Please continue it. |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 06:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO MALIK AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is really good. Maybe for chappie 4, have Malik feel a little undeserving. Like, "You are a future queen, I am a servant. Why would you possibly want me? I am unworthy." then you can say, "You are not unworthy". or something along those lines |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 06:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Go Malik!!!!!!!!!!! That's my baby! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 06:37 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Spelling is better here. It's Emergency. This fic is really good. I was thinking when you had to choose a husband, I'd get Bakura. He he |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 06:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to work on your spelling a bit, but it was really good. I can really identify with this fic. It's really good and I love the premise. I want Bakura as my love slave. He He HE |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl On: April 01, 2003 23:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Go Malik! more lemon! |
Reviewed By: mariksgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 15:33 CST
Comment/Review:
it is supposed to be deseret flower. my bad. |
