| "You Want Lemon?" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
Title: Whoa...
Reviewed By: ObsessedSonicFan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2010 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this.It's hysterical. I loled a lot. Shadow indeed has an ultimate penis...lol XD
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Title: EEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kiyu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thhat was the sickest thin I have evr red, See, mytypinsg sk;lls have dramatically decreses. simse readinmg it. I spment an hour ansa ha!~f in my room, in a corner, cryisn and saying "ewwwwwwwwwwwwww" Ymuo brjinsg mew meenings to te words Mantally Scared! But it was a really cool piece of fanfiction. Thunbs up from Kiyu!
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Title: Aye crumba!
Reviewed By: ShadowFox118 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 23:24 CST
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EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! Yet cool...
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Title: Utter shit
Reviewed By: DoomRater [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not a lemon. It's a rant directed at people who make lemons. ONTO THE CRITIQUE! Shit, only 3885 chars left. First off, fourth wall breaking at the START of the fic. NO. Save that joke for later. Also, making fun of people for getting the joke? YOU'RE THE ONE MAKING THE JOKE... I think I was able to make it through Post's GREATESTFICEVER, but not this. It just stopped being funny after the first few lines.
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Title: You said it well.
Reviewed By: Ultrabitch On: September 13, 2005 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You go a little overboard in making your point, but yes, it is easy to get tired of the same old crap lemons. I swear I've seen enough shitty Son/adow to last me a lifetime. I think you managed to mock just about every style of lemon around. Some of them suck so much ASS. Ignore the people who think you're writing this for your own self-gratification; they obviously have the sense of humour of a dead wombat.
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Title: it was ok
Reviewed By: Fissie On: August 01, 2005 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think everyones opinion matters so i say this. Not all lemons are that bad only the ones that are created by newbies. I personally think this was just a reminder to how some lemons actually are and understand that this was probably meant to refresh the readers mind as to what alot of lemons are. Me am a lemon lover but it dont mean i get horeny off of them who in gods sake can get horny off of a sonic fic besides my annoying neighbor who likles me and is shemale and AND to top it all off can hget horny off of a trash can. I try in my lemon fics tob not only put sex in them i mean i have a life and i do write most of the times only one or two chapters per story with sex in them. i think you are a little immature but please dont take this as me flaming you. You get points for realistictivity.......i dont know if that is a real word or not.
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Title: Sicko
Reviewed By: ??? On: April 25, 2005 10:54 CDT
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This.Is.Sick. You get a life asshole, do something decent with your life rather than sitting at a shitty computer writing about sex and lemons. You disgust me. Any once of decency you may have had in you just crept out of your fucking asshole. Just to let everyone now, I'm not a flamer, this story just disgusted so bad I hope the damn writer dies and burns in hell, oh, hold on, you don't even deserve to be in hell, your worse than the devil himself, you imature bitch. I wonder what your parents think of you, stuck in your room writing lemons all day long. Before I finish this oh so true review I take thid chance to say once again how sick you are and how digusted I am.(I apoagise about my language to the readers of this review. Not the writer, the public.) Now, one last message to the writer, DIE BITCH!
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Title: Bravo.
Reviewed By: Nemesys-sama On: March 11, 2005 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, let me start out by saying that anyone that has left a hateful review needs to grow up and stop masturbating over Sonic characters having sex, furchrissakes. They need to develop a sense of humor while they're at it. Oh, and they're also probably slash authors themselves. Congratulations! You've effectively summed up the many reasons why I hate yaoi fangirls, and for that matter, any fanfic author that takes their "favorite" series and runs it through the meat grinder for the sake of "creativity". Great job. I thought it was fucking hilarious. Keep up the good work.
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Title: why flame?
Reviewed By: sonicscrndude On: February 19, 2005 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, this story is just a lemon (in case youre new thats a fic with sex and lots of it) that is literaly all! not to say that there arnt good lemons(Read "My Night With You" you mortal fools!). its just that this story sounds like it was written while the author was pleasuring himself. Of course that is what most lemons sound like unless they have a well thought out and well written story that most people can get into whil just being able to skip the sex scenes. This story does nothing to raise the bar on the average lemon. "You want a lemon?" blows its way into a mere 4 out of ten
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Reviewed By: saaam On: December 06, 2004 15:28 CST
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and for the record, you dirty rotton piece of scum- nobody asked you to write a lemon. you did that on your own fucking time because you knew how horny you'd get from it. Asshole.
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Reviewed By: saaam On: December 06, 2004 15:25 CST
Comment/Review:
...i'm surprised anyone thought this piece of shit was funny, you stupid little fuck. this was the gayest thing i've ever read. i bet you're an ugly ass bitch with a dick the size of a penny who thinks he's the coolest fucking thing anyone's ever seen. well, let me see... you're not fucking funny. anyone who thinks your fucking funny is fucking stupid. though you made many points in this fic, it was the crappiest piece of shit i've ever read. if you want to dis lemons, go ahead and do it on your own time. get a job yourself, immature little prick. "dickhead, fuckface, cocksucking motherfucker, asshole, dirty twat, waste of soap i hope you die."-GD fuckyoufuckyoufuckyou This immature piece of shit is disgracing yourself (apparenly you're gay, as you're geting a teeny tiny hard on from this fic) and making you yourself seem like a faggot. if you are, then you can go jack off to a picture of a final fantasy character and leave us the fuck alone. You are the dirtiest prick i've ever heard of in my entire life, you scumbag, and i hope you burn in the bowels of hell. Oh-by the way, if you were to ever even CONSIDER becoming either a comedian or a writer, i'd shoot myself. No, i'd shoot you-then myself. as a matter of fact, do us all a favor and shoot yourself. You are a dirty piece of shit that doesn't deserve to walk the planet. I've never been so disgusted with something in my entire life. You make me want to throw up. FUCK YOU ASSHOLE!
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Reviewed By: Sicko On: November 11, 2004 21:27 CST
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHHAAH OMG FHUCKING HELL That was funny shit mans hahahahaha
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Reviewed By: Someone who just pissed themselves On: September 29, 2004 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE GOD! STOP THE LAUGHTER!!! My sides!!! I'm DYING!!! My god, that was so fuckin damn funny, an unfortunately everything you said in it is probably true. which is another reason why it's so funny, there's no way you could make a sequel to this, i dare you to try! *Goes to seek medical treatment for busted guts.*
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Title: im scared
Reviewed By: the rad red can't be bothed to log in On: August 16, 2004 08:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
paralised ******************
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Reviewed By: jus passi'n by On: July 29, 2004 13:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
(Shakes Head) 0_0 Ummmm No comment
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 18:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey dude,I was like so into Sonic when I was little and a lemon for it wasnt right.im serious....you are a good writer though.If you like Final Fantasy I suggest reading my fics.I`ll make a Sonic fic too.Listen,dude,if you are gonna write somthing seperate from the story put in parenthesis and write (A/n:Author`s note)C ya!
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Reviewed By: .................... *cough cough On: March 11, 2004 18:44 CST
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I like lemons as much as da next person, but there is such thing as too much. U scared da hell outa me wit dis fic and all though I suppose u were trying to be funny, yea dat's not wat came through to me. But hey, dat's my oppinion and like most u will probably ignore it. I hope I haven't offended u in any way cuz I wasn't tryin to. Dis is a fanfic site afterall, sooooooo. even though I didn't like dis fic I still think u should rite more... hehehe I dun make any sense. *sigh, anyway, I guess dat's all I wanted to say
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Reviewed By: Kionala [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 16:52 CST
Comment/Review:
laaaaaaa this was weird....have you ever thought girls might like this stuff too?
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Reviewed By: vampire lips [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 10:17 CST
Comment/Review:
(GAP)(GASP)can't stop laughing!!!!!!(gasp) I like!
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Title: Pirate king of the universe
Reviewed By: David Macintyre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 03:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh how I laughed, how I did laugh. The only thing more true than this is probably It Ends Here by Danse Macabre. Dirty thoughts! Evil, evil smut!
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Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 02:43 CDT
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I didn't think it was possible. you were funny and boring at the same time. |
Reviewed By: amelia silver On: June 05, 2003 19:10 CDT
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mwahaha...your point has been made really clear...lol...this was too hilarious..... |
Reviewed By: DDR freek On: April 30, 2003 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I freakin' pissed my pants i was laughing so hard!! I totally, like, fell off my bed onto my ass... And even though the ass is hurtin', my stomach hurts more from laughing!
Write another one! Write another one!!
OR I'LL EAT YOUR SKETTIOS!!..... OR YOUR KIDS!! |
Reviewed By: rouge the bat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 19:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is not supposed to be gay or straight it's suppose to be funny and offensive!!! thats why i'm crazy about this story. you gotta admit the amy with a dick was sooo damn funny, come(cum he he he)on admit it, i see you smiling. yeah. thats right. if you have anything ANYTHING at all to say youse guys say it to me youse little pricks(not amy BIG PRICK>^^ |
Reviewed By: Sonic and Tails On: April 20, 2003 23:25 CDT
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This is so fucking gay that it does not even deserve a 1 and to tell the truth I think that you’re telling everyone that you are gay because you like girls with dicks. You’re the kind of guy who would fuck a man in the ass and NOT EVEN have the god damn common courtesy to give him a reach around. |
Reviewed By: Sonic fan 982 On: April 20, 2003 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the gayest fucking thing I have ever read. I don’t know who the hell you are but I sure hope that you mature sometime soon you stupid little fuck. |
Reviewed By: rouge_the_bat On: March 29, 2003 17:26 CST
Comment/Review:
this is the funniest thing i ever read.
if you make a sequel do me and the rest of the entire world a favor
and well not release it to put it bluntly. this
was too cruel to be a lemon. this was a red ass bashing
if i ever saw one! this fanfic goes greatr with
mindless self indulgence (the best band if you don't know)
well thank you for leaving mina the mon goose out.
and also, um... no she was there... rou no shadow,
am no she had a dick,you should put rollerblades on sally
and then she would be the incredible roller bitch!
i'm on my dreamcast now so i can't login. hit me back at rouge_the_bat@ranmamail.com
oh yeah don't bash the reader. you wrote it you put a dick on amy um person, um
don't do that!!!! don't make rouge a slut eeither!!
don't do that!!!! hey mister! no stop DONT DO THAT!!! |
Reviewed By: rouge_the_bat On: March 29, 2003 17:26 CST
Comment/Review:
this is the funniest thing i ever read.
if you make a sequel do me and the rest of the entire world a favor
and well not release it to put it bluntly. this
was too cruel to be a lemon. this was a red ass bashing
if i ever saw one! this fanfic goes greatr with
mindless self indulgence (the best band if you don't know)
well thank you for leaving mina the mon goose out.
and also, um... no she was there... rou no shadow,
am no she had a dick,you should put rollerblades on sally
and then she would be the incredible roller bitch!
i'm on my dreamcast now so i can't login. hit me back at rouge_the_bat@ranmamail.com
oh yeah don't bash the reader. you wrote it you put a dick on amy um person, um
don't do that!!!! don't make rouge a slut eeither!!
don't do that!!!! hey mister! no stop DONT DO THAT!!! |
