| "When You Least Expect It" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good. I regret that there is not more to it.
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 06:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY!! ANother great chapter! I really like this fic, its different from all the others! Finally, somthing new!!! Keep up the great work! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Riltani On: April 11, 2003 06:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet again another great Chapter, and Yeah for Gohan, although I wo'der what Vegeta's going to say when he sees him "Beaten by a human, and I see you haven't kept up with your training" God he can be so mean....wait, that bit didn't happen, oh well, just thinking ahead!! Gohan must have really let himself go if Akui bruised him, I hope he can recover, can't wait for the next Chapter!!
BTW, the only reason you got a 9 for spelling and grammer in this one is that good evening is spelt Konbanwa not konbonwa, but other than that, perfect again! |
Reviewed By: Riltani On: March 29, 2003 06:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this has me hooked already, please contine soon! I just love it, It's fantastic!! You're fantastic for writing it, I can sence this will be a very powerful story. |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 06:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool I like this!! Nice start! I wanna read more! Please update soon!! This is very promising! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 04:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoo, so Gohan self-injures huh? Looks incredibly promising, and has an emotional tone that rings true & brings to reality the pairing of physical & mental abuse. Physically, Akui could never really hurt Gohan... unless he lowered his ki enough to let him. But emotionally, that's another matter...
Looking foward to more! |
Reviewed By: Rascal On: July 15, 2003 15:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I must comment- Why oh why do you refer to mirai Trunks as Mirai? Mirai means future in Japanese, it is not a name. It is a way of ditinguishing the two Trunks from one another in print. When you just say mirai, it just means future as in the future, not future Trunks. |
