"War, Loss, and Love" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: MOONGIRL On: August 25, 2002 15:04 CDT Comment/Review: MOONGIRL:* ON A STAGE IN A BLUE DRESS* AND THE AWARD GOSE TO
TRUNK'S GIRL. FOR THE BEST TENCHI AND DBZ CROSSOVER.
EVERYBODY CLAPING.
&&&&& THE DINNER PARTY&&&&&&&&&&&&
MOONGIRL: SHOULD HAVE MADE MORE FOOD.
RYOKO AND SAMIAM: YA SHOULD HAVE.
MISHOE AND THE DBZ FIGHTER ARE IN AN EATING CONTES WITH KERO AND YUE.
MOONGIRL: I LOVED THE FANFICS.
TURNK:NO FARE THERE EATING FOR TWO.* POINTING TO YUE AND KREO. HOLDING UP THE TROPER. |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2002 16:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!!! THis is SO freaking GOOD! I can't believe you don't have more reviews! Oh yeah - the reason for the 5 is because your verb tenses are really screwed up. But otherwise, it's FANTASTIC! |
Reviewed By: person On: May 09, 2002 00:26 CDT Comment/Review: oh, i didn't review this yet? *slamms a wish fish into her head* ok, it good!:) |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2002 22:24 CDT Comment/Review: mizu was right this is a kick ass fic
cool keep it up,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2002 23:27 CDT Comment/Review: *strangels Trunks'Girl787* YOU ASSWHIPE! YOU STOPED AND YOUR GOING TO KILL ME!!! (i role play Ryoko in a lil anime fan group of mine in school)
great fic plz put up more ASAP,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2002 21:23 CDT Comment/Review: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU STOPED!!!! YOUR NOT ALLOWED TO STOP!!!!!!!!! BY ORDER OF THE MIZU MEGAMI (water godess) YOU MUST CONTINUE ON THIS AND THE PERQUILE TO THIS ASAP.
ok im done yelling and my voice is getting horse so just plz hurry with next chap.
*has sore throut*,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: January 29, 2002 07:40 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is the first non perverted fic iv read thats dbz and tm put together. ok its only the second dbz/tm fic but still its not perverted and its real good plz up date soon...aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! im late for school ok gata go bye *runs like all hell broke loose* |
Reviewed By: Miyu On: October 30, 2001 20:26 CST Comment/Review: hey i rrrrrrreeeeeeeeeaaaaaaallllllllyyyyyy lie this fic!!!! update soon- and email me when u do!! betrayl124@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: trunks girl On: November 19, 2001 18:31 CST Comment/Review: Heyz. I really like this ficcy. I don't usually like TEnchi fics, but this one is an exception (mainly cuz it has my boy Trunks in it.) Please update!!!!!!!!! |