| "Carnality" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: shred55 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow....wow....
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Reviewed By: sango-chen (NLI) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 01:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
deliciously nasty. i loved it! i really wanna see you write more. and now i shall go take a cold shower...
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: February 08, 2004 21:25 CST
Comment/Review:
DAMN! Whoa! Your first? I can't write like that! YOu are in my top three yoai lemon writers.
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 03:14 CST
Comment/Review:
It was good. So what happens next? Are their parents happy, unhappy?
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Reviewed By: MegumiAmano [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so hot, I had to hose down my computer!!!
Your first lemon??? My god!!!!
I loved it.
Slam |
Reviewed By: Black Panther On: April 05, 2003 03:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the best Trunks\Goten lemon I have ever seen until now.Great work! |
Reviewed By: Shadowz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 03:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, that was hot! You say that was your first lemon, Whoa! I look forward to hopefully reading more of your stuff in the future. |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! I just got up, and this is the first thing I read today, and WOW!! What a glorious way to wake up!!
EXCELLENT first lemon!! It was absolutely DELICIOUS!! Trunks X Goten IS my favorite pairing, and it's refreshing to read a tale of lust, and passion, in addition to their obvious love for one another!! I think this may be the first TxGt hunt I've read, and it was excellent! ~sighs~ Gotta love the tails!!
It was extremely well written, very steamy, deliciously descriptive...just an excellent, enjoyable bit of Truteny goodness! Loved it!! |
