| "Dear Sally" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: miss nyanko On: October 18, 2003 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good and well written. ^_^ I loved it!! Please continue your fabulous writing. I also like how you portray the characters. However, the vocalization during the sex scenes is...well...unneeded. Just use descritive words instead, it works better. ^_^ Otherwise, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: animelover212 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 01:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
good job! i loved it! you definently improved since the first chapter and this story had a lovely ending and a nice problem/solution. i love 1x2 and this one was great! keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very intresting story. Very enjoyable, too! Definetly a original story line! Love happens from a Dear Sally editorial from a newspaper! ^_^ Definetly cute. Just one little thing... can you kindly tell me what the different Japanese phrases were? I didn't see a translation for them anywhere... thank you, and keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: duo no baka On: July 17, 2003 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH thank you!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please add the epilogue really really soon cause I want to see them fucking already!!! I think we have all waited enough that they deserve it even more than we do. Please write again and don't give up on this story because I want to make sure it has a happy ending. Write more soon!!
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: June 12, 2003 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE!!! |
Reviewed By: Angel_of_innocence [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a good fic please continue but just one thing ummm....no offense but it's chang wufei not wufei chang. I thought you might want to change that around. Meaning it would be sally wufei not sally chang. |
Reviewed By: GW_ShenLong On: April 13, 2003 06:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snicker... snicker... snicker*
In case I haven't already told you this is cool ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 05:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMFG!! This is great! the club scene...as a fellow aussie, the drinks made that scene priceless. I love ordering drinks wiht those names and seeing everyone's reaction. HAHA. And the bunny...tis so cute!!! More soon, I'm hooked |
Reviewed By: Bratcat On: April 10, 2003 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable. Love the interaction and dialoge. Wating inpatiently for more. |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is priceless!!! *wipes tears if laughter from eyes*
I LOVE the scene in the pet shop!!!
*holds out plate*
More Heero/Duo please!!!
Talon |
Reviewed By: Jessica On: April 01, 2003 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy cow, this is cute! I'm savin' this one for now! In any case, you're doing a great job--- it's very difficult to make an OOC Heero, or Trowa for that matter. But then again, it's after the war, and Heero now now truly be human again. Oh, and you need to work on your lemons pretty badly. I skipped that part. Otherwise, everything looks great, writing-wise. SUPER CUTE! Keep up the good work! |
