| "Cult Characteristic" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: fanny On: July 28, 2003 16:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
yes, yes, i'm reviewing again. Dorothy is so cool! She's really smart, and she's the only one that knows the full story! I guess she'll have to explain it to everyone. and there back at the cult house.. Duo and Wufei are gonna get really pissed.. but then again, the people will get there just desserts! hurry with the next chpter!
p.s. overall .. a 20! |
Reviewed By: Aoede On: July 28, 2003 14:59 CDT
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Oh. Yay. whee...
i'm speechless, as always. Three new chapters for me to read! and it still looks that's far from ending.
Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Dyna On: July 27, 2003 23:55 CDT
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I've been reading this on GWA and haven't been able to comment. Now's my chance to tell you that I think this is a great fic. Angst ridden, action packed, tragic and horrific, all of which combine to an create an entertaining, chair gripping story. Loved the action in this last chapter, the telling was done perfectly. I'm wondering what's gong to happen to Duo, but since Une has the ability to tell Wufei to end things in any way possible, no matter the damage, I'm sure she can rummage up some excuse for Duo. The only questionable part I found, was that Duo sure seemed to recover quickly from not being able to stand on his own or tolerate the sunshine. How did he go from that to flying a gundam and vengefully and fiercely in one day? Other than that unexplainable, quick turn around recovery, I think this is a great fic. Thanks for the exciting read! |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter ..Wow this story is soooo great ..I just can't whait to the next chapter I hope you update soon... keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: fanny On: July 27, 2003 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok.. i would give you a higher rating in enjoyment and overall.. but it only goes to 10. this is one of the best stories i've read... and most of my favorites are yours! you ahve to keep going.. and explain it all at the end!! i'm only a simple girl who's head spins when she reads this.. yet it's so good i keep reading! |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNOW I DON'T HAVE TO REVIEW EVERY CHAPTER .. BUT I WAN'T TO ENCOURAGE YOU TO WRITE.. AND TO PRESS UPON YOU WHAT A GOOD WRITER YOU ARE... I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON BECAUSE I LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE OF THIS STORY THANK YOU ... |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNOW I DON'T HAVE REVIEW EVERY CAAPTER .. BUT I WAN'T ENCOURAGE YOU TO WRITING AND TO PRESS UPON YOU WHAT A GOOD WRITER YOU ARE... I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON BECAUSE I LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE OF THIS STORY THANK YOU ... |
Reviewed By: Aoede On: July 19, 2003 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I LOVE it. Every part of it. I love the whole cult thing. I love Heero and Duo's relationship. I love the plot. I love Fiona (she's such a cutie!). I love Duo's new Gundam. I love the gory parts. I love the plot. I love how you gave Wufei some sort of main role. Did i mention i love the plot?
Really, in originality and enjoyment factor, i give you an A+++++++++++ and a 100000000000. I love your descriptions. And i love you and hate you at the same time for being such a kickass writer. Update soon! i really want to see the end of it.
*Aoede* |
Reviewed By: me&mine On: July 13, 2003 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a ... I can't find words to describe this fanfiction. All I can say that you should i dunno get this publish somehow... You should seriously thinking of going into literature and become a writer of your rights. Hell, my stuffs so far are no where up to your level and I already wanting to become a writer.
You have serious talent. I've read so much books in my life that I can't get them straight and I dunno if you take my praise in any into any account but this is the first time I have ever being so skillfully weaved into a story that isn't by a professional.
I really do hope that you have a passion for writing and spinning words together to create another universe, but coz even if you have talent but no passion behind it it would go to waste. plz, really think about becoming a writer. and if you already did ahahhahahah ignore my babbles. ^_^
Cecillia Tran |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I love this story ...But this chapter is to short !!! all chapters need to be longer!!! Know you need to update sooner Please...This story is sooo good we can't whait untill the next chapter (bows head and cry's) Please we need more!!! |
Reviewed By: Meef Monster On: June 23, 2003 15:19 CDT
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Holly WOW....this is one kick ass fic...cant wait to read more~! |
Reviewed By: fanny On: June 03, 2003 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...wow... i'm still lost.. but you usually explain all of this stuff in your last chapter. so i can't wait!!! this is so good. you have so many storie going on at the same time.. and i'm reading them all |
Reviewed By: penance On: May 17, 2003 09:54 CDT
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I enjoy your story. It's fresh, different, and makes you want more. I like how you use Wufei as a the voice of the story. It's a fun read and I hope you update soon. Thank you. |
Reviewed By: blahblahblak On: April 25, 2003 07:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!!
Don't tell me it's THAT R-woman?!!! Oh no! How can she torture Duo?!!!
I Love your plot! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2003 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS JUST WONDERFUL ... wELL WRITEN,AND WELL SPOKEN.. T hank you for udateing so often and a really aployed you for your great writeing... Thanks again!!!!! |
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