| "Oh, For Pete's Sake!" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Catreena On: April 09, 2003 19:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, what happened to Layla? Did she go to the DBZ world too? I'm confused. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN ITTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED ITT!! *sobs*
Shit that was good girl so what are you waiting for Give me the sequel!!!! I crave it I need it *chokes and dies*
Nah Im fine im trying to make u write faster! soory!
Anywho Thank u I enjoyed the stripping although Vegeta and Trunks needed encourangement but thats ok I agree with Mischeif maker ....*walks aways with the thoughts of Vegeta and a lapdance*
Later Update soon I wanna know what happened to Layla |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN ITTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED ITT!! *sobs*
Shit that was good girl so what are you waiting for Give me the sequel!!!! I crave it I need it *chokes and dies*
Nah Im fine im trying to make u write faster! soory!
Anywho Thank u I enjoyed the stripping although Vegeta and Trunks needed encourangement but thats ok I agree with Mischeif maker ....*walks aways with the thoughts of Vegeta and a lapdance*
Later Update soon I wanna know what happened to Layla |
Reviewed By: Kalia_Son [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 18:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
well, i liked it. i cant wait for the sequel to it, and what happened to layla? i wanna know what happened to her to. keep it up!it was a great sequle to "For crying out loud".
-laterz |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woo hoo! You can keep Cell, but I'll borrow the others for a few hours. Oh yeah, can we say lap dance....
Heh heh. Anyway, I like the fic. What's up with Veggie, though. Are they really going back so soon??!! Update soon. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 18:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Catches Vegeta's Plushie* (Now I can go and Play) *chuckles evilly with a hentai grinn*
AHEMMM! Sorry!
OH I loved it!!!! Finally Trunks and Shasta lemony moment! *CHHEERRSS* Good for you guys!, The lemon was very very sweet I loved it.
Now Why is my baby sick!!!! *cries* He cant go bacK!! I wont let him!! He has to stay with Layla damn IT! Please update soon OK! Im dying here!
Please next time you whack Vegeta on the head with the frying pan can I have him I want to play with him! *hentai grin*
Oh yes you have your feedback so now make good out of your promise and make that bishie harem strip for me !! LOL!
Thank you for the dedication :D
Later!
Oh yeah and since Im a hentai ,when is the next lemon going to be? >:D |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they are not leaving yet are they that is so not fair. keep up the great work |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was some pwoerful chaps keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 19:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey U almost killed me I thought that she was dead WHEW!!! Poor Goku!!! he feels guilty .Hey I waana see Jonh's ass kicked very very badly I mean how dare he! AHHH! I want to murder something! Please continue!!!!!!!
Update sooN!
Later! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic girl so u better keep on writting PLEASEEEE!!!!!!!!!! oh and um Sorry Trunks but u better go and have a lemony moment with Shasta already .!!!!
UPDATE SOOONNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!
Later!!
And I hope John doesnt get in this if he does that punk is in for a fucking beating Go get Him Vegeta! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read for crying out loud and loved it and so far this is going in the same direction. I love this so far and keep up the great work. |
