"What should i do with you today?" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Update! Reviewed By: Yugioh Freak All the Way! [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 17:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kami On: April 14, 2003 13:18 CDT Comment/Review: Ahem I'm back again .please hurry and right the next chapter so I can live to see tommorow Becuase I'll come back every day till ya do. - ~
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Reviewed By: Kami On: April 13, 2003 11:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Told ya I'd be back. Iknow I should give you more time considering the fact that I was just here yesterday but hopefully you already started on the next chapter. : ) |
Reviewed By: Kami On: April 12, 2003 20:42 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Keep righting I wanna know what is gonna happen in the next chapter. You could bother to make it a little longer thoe. :)Oh yeah and I'll come back everyday till ya do k : ) |
Reviewed By: Kami On: April 12, 2003 20:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Keep righting I wanna know what is gonna happen in the next chapter. You could bother to make it a little longer thoe.:) |