| "What's Left Unseen" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Tohru819 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this fic rocks! I'm your #1 fan Ina-chan! And my favorite of all your fics are definatly the ones about Yuki. This one is soo good! I can't wait to see what happens next! I sure hope that Yuki gets back with Tohru. I love Yuki but if he broke her heart I would kill him! (I don't care if he's not real, I'd find a way) Message for Ina-chan: Ina-chan, it's been more then a year since you last updated the story. I know you could be having writers block or something but could you just let me know for sure that you havn't abandonded this fic?
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Reviewed By: Hiroto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!! I am so serious. This fic has a totally fresh take on the cast of Fruba and you take the readers deep into the heart of the story. I love the way you portray the characters and I love the way you seem to personify them in just their dialouge. I can't wait until you update! This story is going in my favorites section!
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Reviewed By: Kitsuki On: March 21, 2005 23:31 CST
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I've been waiting so long for an update, and I'm so happy it has finally come! I'm really excited for the upcoming updates. I hope they are soon. I like this style... it's very evocotive of each characters personality without spending a lot of time delving into their psyche's. Hmm... good job. Make Tohru happy, OK?
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Reviewed By: MsCongeniality [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I very much enjoyed the latest chapter and am more than willing to wait for more if they're all going to be this good! And as always, I'm glad to see truly good Fruits Basket fic.
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: Luraia Soul [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! I don't think I've ever given a 10 on writing style to anyone before! Great job!!! this story just gets more in depth with all the newly intertwining relationships,...please continue! I can't wait to see what you think of next. Ciao!!
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Reviewed By: aya chan On: May 06, 2003 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yuki seemed like he was genuinely shocked to see what he was doing and with who (or was it just because he said the wrong name... somehow I don't think so). I can't help but wonder if he wasn't aware somehow of what was happening... and if it was perhaps the doing of someone else... (Sounds like a strange thoery, right? But your writing is interesting that I don't doubt your plot will go deeper than most). |
Reviewed By: treble gurl On: April 20, 2003 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You HAVE to continue! I love it! So kewl its from Shigure's point of view. CONTINUE! |
Reviewed By: Lynn-chan On: April 01, 2003 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you tell I enjoyed this fic? ^_^ Very intriguing... I definitally didn't expect that! Wonderful, I can't wait for the rest! |
