| "Withered as a Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: ChibiSagara On: October 30, 2003 13:11 CST
Comment/Review:
WAH! NOOO! DON't LET THE ROSE DIE! WAH! YOU JUST CAN'T!!!!!!!! [a very good story though. i only got up to chapter 4 but it is great until there!]
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Reviewed By: Isilmir64389000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2003 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I know what Corick's soul is...MWAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! Is it...well, should I say? *nod nod* yes I think I should. It is --- *Dryst comes in and starts chasing Isilmir around with his bow and arrow that he shot Corick with* EEEP!
Well *dodges arrow #1* Great Story! *dodges arrow #2* Keep it up! *dodges arrow #3* I'll be checking for updates! *runs into a wall and knocks herself unconcious, thus avoiding arrow #4*
(P.S.: Hope you don't mind my using Dryst ^.^ otherwise I would have to spoil what I think is a great twist in the plot. If you could, Would you read and review my original fic "The Last Tear" I think you'd enjoy it as much as I've enjoyed your fic!) |
Reviewed By: annie On: April 11, 2003 15:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dryst is the most evil one!! Lol..
Well thank you for fixing up the chapter! ^_^
Hmm would you please email me when the next chapters get posted? Here's my email: sweetlilnightdemon@hotmail.com
Once again, keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: MysticIceDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 09:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Eep! That was due to my own stupidity. Lol, i apologize. I am glad you like the story so far. ANd it should be fixed now. Thanks for reading! |
Reviewed By: annie On: April 11, 2003 01:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Quick question: why is chap 6 and 7 the same? =S
I feel so bad for Corick.. Dryst is just ruining everything! *grrr*
Well as usual keep up the good work! Please post more chapters soon |
Reviewed By: annie On: April 11, 2003 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW.. this is amazing.. Trina sounds like such a sweet child ^^ and Corick sounds like the perfect vampire =p
Well I haven't discovered any spelling errors due to being entranced by this story.. so keep up the good work! Now on to chap 3... |
Reviewed By: annie. On: April 23, 2003 22:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
No... I don't think there are any Dryst/Catrina fans out there bwahahaha =)
Aww.. Catrina is so sweet to Corick (obviously).. I hope she doesn't get hurt by Dryst ='(
Keep up the good work! And I am ashamed at people who visit but don't review! *Growls* |
