| "Yotan's Dating Service" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zeto On: May 03, 2003 22:50 CDT
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Lol! Funny is one word to describe this fic. But funny just doesn't cut it!
I'm surprised more people don't review! This fic deserves it. |
Reviewed By: Zeto On: May 03, 2003 22:40 CDT
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Oh, Ch 2 is wonderful!
*Snickers* Schu doess't want Yohji to win! Ah, the humouris fantastic. Plus, 'not a morning person'. Poor Yohji! Perfectly written, like before. |
Reviewed By: Zeto On: May 03, 2003 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the most interestng, unique fics I've ever read.
I've rated it 10/10 for everything because that's what I truly believe it deserves.
It's very captivating and one-of-a-kind. This is incredibly well=written with, as far as I can tell, no grammar or spelling errors. I really, really like it alot. The style is great too. The sentences vary and the phrases aren't too bad. The plot is fantastic.
The characters are quite believeable too.
You're an excellent writer, keep it up. |
Reviewed By: shiroki On: April 29, 2003 05:20 CDT
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[sorry for the dble review, something got eaten up somewhere...]
*chews on lip agitatedly*
this was good, as usual... oh, the suspense x__X~
the lemon was... good. ^^; in an unexpected way... but it was good ^__^ ganbatte on your school stuffs, ne! *waiting with baited breath for the next post, whether its tomorrow or next week...* thanks again for another chappie~ |
Reviewed By: shiroki On: April 29, 2003 05:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
*chews on lip agitatedly*
this was good, as usual... oh, the suspense >__ |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: April 28, 2003 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pumps fist in the air* Whoohoo! *^^* Update soon! The fic keeps getting better and better! :D |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: April 22, 2003 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing chapter! Even though I reviewed it on ff.net...Nicely done! |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 04:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay!!! Another chapter!!!
This is getting really good now - can't wait till the next one!! :D |
Reviewed By: Shiroki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 22:13 CDT
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....nooo....
another week T-T
but thanks for posting so regularly ^-^
this chapter is looking better than ever ^_^
will be waiting as patiently as i can manage for the next part ^^;;
btw, just lurve how sweet omi & nagi are together... not to mention the idea ran in an apron, jealously guarding his food... XD ganbatte kudasai!! ^^/ |
Reviewed By: Anria Lalumin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 16:28 CDT
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Next week?!? Dammit, I don't think I can wait that long! Please continue! |
Reviewed By: lituska_silvermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 13:49 CDT
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OOhhh.... O_O... I am interested to see what part Farf playes in all this... :)
Very good chapter, nice to see how your tying them together...
Cant wait (as usual) for the next bit.
Good luck! |
Reviewed By: Zeto On: May 03, 2003 23:13 CDT
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*Swallows* Oh, hell. Who let Farfie out? Remember what happened *last* time? He killed and maimed about a gazillion people? ... Okay, okay! So, maybe he didn't! He might've. Just because I've never seen Weiss doesn't mean I don't know what happened in the TV series....
Excellent as usual. I know you updated like three days ago but...I need more! What would it take for more? |
Reviewed By: Pandora.81 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 05:55 CDT
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Hehehe, Schu-chan needs a cold shower... a cold shower with Yotan preferred. *grins*
Ahh, just don't mind my hentai thoughts. ^^'
This story is really getting better and better. Can't wait till the next update. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: lituska_silvermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 17:26 CDT
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Hehhehehe.... falling over laughing at the thought of Schu on bad dates
Cant wait to see how these two get together...
More soon please!! |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 10:02 CDT
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This just gets better and better! :)
Looking forward to the next chapter already! |
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