Reviewed By: Dark Lady On: April 02, 2003 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...well you have A LOT of spelling errors. For example it's Set, not Seth. And Heishin. And a lot of grammer errors too. Seto is hot and all, but with Yami...that's just wrong. Kinda kinky though. ^^ Seto is miiine!! DIE YAMI! ^^; |
