| "The Pencil 2" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Tyler Durden2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
More description needed so the fic makes sense. A plot needed so the fic isn't pointless. Characterisation needed so it feels realistic. A dictionary needed so you can find out how things like spelling and punctuation work. I'm so tired of lazy, pointless fan fics like this that I can't be bothered to write any more criticism. Just put a little effort in to it next time. In fact this review is just a copy of the last one I wrote. That's how tired I am of these half-assed fics.
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Reviewed By: ladythief On: April 11, 2004 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! funny so far. I want Bakura if he's not taken. Pwease? ^-^ Thankies! For gifts: Bakura: A book on how to take over the world in seven easy steps. Malik: A flamethrower! ^-^ Yugi/Mokuba: Lifetime supply of candy.
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Reviewed By: Lil Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 10:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
o.o WEEEE!!! YAMI YAMI YAMI!!! MINE MINE MINE!!! Yami Lil S: Excuse her, she hasn't had her meds this morning... Lil S: ::huggles a Yami plushie to death:: MINE!! Yami Lil S: -_-"""
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Reviewed By: dragonflame On: February 04, 2004 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, if you don't mind, I'll claim Malik too!! you see, I'm from the Netherlands, I can do whatever I want!! *evil grin* Yeh, I'm crazy, everybody tells me that :P Good job by the way!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Red-Eyes Toon Dragon On: August 19, 2003 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I CLAIM TEA! I CLAIM TEA! I CLAIM TEA! TEA IS MINE! Anyway! I GIVE GIFTS
To Tea:
1. Lots and lots of candy
2. Evey single Duel Monsters card EVER
3. A Magician of Faith plushie
To Kaiba
1. A BEWD plushie
2. An Obelisk plushie (hug a god!)
To Yugi:
1. A bonk on the head
To Yami:
1. A bonk on the head
To Bakura:
1. A bonk on the head
To Marik:
1. A bonk on the head
That's it. YAY! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: malik'sgurl On: May 01, 2003 02:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have a gift list for Malik:
i want to give him all the weapons of mass destruction, that includes the high-tech stuff and whatever he needs to destroy or rule the world. all of the millennium items, the others can just have the fake ones, power stronger than yami bakura and yami combined. unlimited supply of sugar, caffeine, candy. oh and one more thing, can i go out with him for a date, please.
for you:
candy, sugar and caffeine so that you'd get all hyper and everything |
Reviewed By: Solo_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I claim Malik. I love you!!! You're evil but sweet (not like Marik who is all mean)
And to him I give an ankh, a bottle of tanning foam, the pharaoh's crown, and a ticket to the Ancient Egypt exibit showing objects from Yami's tomb.
Yugi
the other pieces of Exodia |
Reviewed By: G-sell On: April 06, 2003 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh! I'm sorry about before ( I was sugar-high!!)Anyway!
To yami:A basket of hair things with a coupon for a year supply of hair gel
kaiba:A brand new beeper that every time you get a call it says "get a life,get a life!" |
Reviewed By: G-sell On: April 06, 2003 22:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
MMMMMOOOORRRREEEE!!!! |
Reviewed By: Setoluvr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're mean to Seto.Oh well even though I love him
he is easy to pick on.I claim Seto! Can I be a cohost? Also I have some gifts I would like to send.
1.Seto
To him I send a pet baby Blue-Eyes White Dragon[extra vicious]
2.Mokuba
10 thousand pounds of sugar
3.Yugi
10 thousand pixie stix[mmmm...pixie stix] |
Reviewed By: MaujinVader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far so good
my favorite characters
1) serenity
my gift to her: sunglasses!! you cant beat them!!
and $200. (i gotta spoil my favorite character)
2) yami bakura
my gift to him: an industrial strength paintball gun! along with about 780 paintballs (to shoot yami!!!) laughs like an insane person while running from all the yami fans
3)mokuba
my gift to him: a 1st edition redeyesblack dragon and 4 year season pass to six flags |
