| "Just a Game" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: paniwi not logged in On: February 17, 2005 09:42 CST
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this is one hell of a good story, love how you characterized everyone, and how they feel about one another. Wonderfully written, don't stop writing ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tiamat Selene On: April 15, 2004 20:22 CDT
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I Love Yami Marik/Tea lemons(fics). They really do stimulate me into thinking. In a hentai and not-hentai context. Yami Marik (IMO) is incrediably fuckable and you display your writing talents so well here. Please write another lemon soon. I really would apprecate it! ^_____^
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Reviewed By: Tiamat Selene On: January 23, 2004 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. ^___^ Everything about it is fantastic. From the characters to the "plot". You did a wonderful job and I hope that maybe you might write a squeal telling us what happens when Yami sees Tea there. Please.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Veeeeeeeerrrry good! Very original!I never thought I'd see this pairing... It was sweet in twisted sort of way..... But it just craves another chapter! |
Reviewed By: Rey Rey On: June 28, 2003 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story one of the few straight Yu-gi-oh! Lemons that doesn't have an Original Character and I congratulate you and hope you create more straight or yuri lemons. |
Reviewed By: Irony is me and i am Irony On: May 27, 2003 09:57 CDT
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this is evil... and i love it. YOu sould keep writing, you have a real telent for hentai which is a good thign cause i can't even discribe a kiss.
I wish you put out a lemon sequel for Scribbles in the RAin. i would love to see how Ryou fairs against Bakura in bed. ^_^ i mean she has to prefer one right??
WEll anyway way to go. i love this |
Reviewed By: morgannia On: April 10, 2003 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great, I love the power/control issues & I would definitely be interested in reading a sequal. It's damn good, you should continue it. It was a pleasure. |
Reviewed By: shadow_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh!my!gods!!!!!!!!!that was like so awsome!ilove how you ended it!very good indeed!keeping everyone in suspense!?thats almsot as bad as geting yelled at by muse!
malikmuse:i hateher!
me:why?
malikmuse:becauses shes making marik poses my body and never ahve it back!
me:oh cry me river!
malik:*acutlleycrys me ariver*
me:well now i have seen everything?hahahaha!great storythough!*notices all th review space she is taking up*oh...um..sorry for taking up so much review space!byeeeeeeeee |
Reviewed By: Lady Starisa On: April 06, 2003 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing...sorry but I can't login cause of this cookies stuff. Please write more! I love it!Happy writings... |
Reviewed By: Tsunami On: April 04, 2003 15:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Awesome fanfic!!!! Hope u continue it, or at least write another ;) |
Reviewed By: Ashley On: April 04, 2003 04:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good fanfic!!! Interesting - needs another chapter, to see what happened next :-) |
