| "Bloody Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Love it!!!
Reviewed By: Yelhsa69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!! *adds to her favorite story list* I can't wait for Chapter 4!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Darkstar51 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 03:27 CST
Comment/Review:
you had a few mistakes with the spellng but it is soooooo nice! please please up date soon!
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Reviewed By: Kiki On: April 05, 2003 12:21 CST
Comment/Review:
hey pretty cool fic! they sound like nice girls, can't wait for the guys to meet them^^ |
Reviewed By: Aryanna On: April 06, 2003 07:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
It is a nice change of pace in a way to see a non-yaoi fic at times ^_^
A few spelling mistakes here and there but then it is not always easy to spot your own mistakes.. thats what beta-readers are for ^_^
An interesting start, but you still need to develop your style of writing. Just putting in descriptive characteristics for the girls at times can sound not as smooth on the reader.
Rather than make it stand out and obvious, perhaps putting it more subtly in the story will give your story a better flow.
But like i said , good start, keep writing!! ^_^ |
